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Mercstouch chapter 3 . 4/23/2018 And a nice conclusion. The whole session in Odell’s office was very emotional and heavy. The most telling detail I think was Salem referencing Dmitri. I could see Dmitri in his jealousy helping to plant the seed of doubt in Salem by having him believe that a lack of experience will drove a wedge between him and Vasily. And Salem would have an easier time believing Dmitri’s insults than Vasily’s affirmations. The body language of the characters was great in this scene, especially Salem’s erratic behavior and sudden outbursts. Throughout you show an interesting contrast between professional objectivity and heavy emotional connection. It seems like everyone struggles to manage the two sides. Well done again! Thanks for posting :) |