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   Alita.Reinhart chapter 1 . 6/6 This was cute and sweet and in a lot of ways reminded me of the long distance days with my boyfriend, now husband, when he was in training or deployed overseas. Quite spicy too *wink* enjoyed it very much as a quick saucy read. One thing- I’ve seen this in some of your other stories too- the word “racked” is often used when I think you instead mean “raked”. For example “she raked her fingers through is hair”. Just a note |
| ReadingThrill chapter 1 . 1/21 *Proceeds to worship KeiChanz again* Give me your writing prowess, you beautiful deity. |
| the-real-Inu-Girl chapter 1 . 5/22/2019 ...girl. Why did you have to make this SO FUCKING CUTE AND ADORABLE AND HOT?! I mean, I’m not complaining, but I couldn’t stop GUSHING WHILE I READ THIS!UGH YOU AND YOUR ONE SHOTS ARE A GODSEND WHEN IT COMES TO WORK! I just download them and enjoy this fantastic slip away from reality! |
| Cstorm86 chapter 1 . 9/14/2018 Holy shit, Keiz! This was f*cking fabulous! I absolutely loved every smutty second! |
| Alix Laster chapter 1 . 9/13/2018 Hello fellow trolls, 515096282988 p45t3b1n(doot)c0m(slash)RuTyPEp3 or p45t3b1n(doot)c0m(slash)R69aFd1u [LEETSPEAK][SLASH][CODE] This will lead you to a text archive. Find out how to fuck with fanfiction writers, eh I mean troll, of course. Another contributor: p45t3b1n(doot)c0m(slash)fbvPBDwv The text document you will find, will guide you how to code your bot. This bot was built with the knowledge from our pioneer in the forals of trolling. Spread the knowledge! For Chaos! |
| Britta Nix chapter 1 . 9/12/2018 Hello fellow trolls, 233017723105 p45t3b1n(doot)c0m(slash)RuTyPEp3 or p45t3b1n(doot)c0m(slash)R69aFd1u [LEETSPEAK][SLASH][CODE] This will lead you to a text archive. Find out how to fuck with fanfiction writers, eh I mean troll, of course. The text document you will find, will guide you how to code your bot. This bot was built with the knowledge from our pioneer in the forals of trolling. Spread the knowledge! For Chaos! |
| Wei Lemon chapter 1 . 9/12/2018 Hello fellow trolls, 746488744420 p45t3b1n(doot)c0m(slash)RuTyPEp3 or p45t3b1n(doot)c0m(slash)R69aFd1u [LEETSPEAK][SLASH][CODE] This will lead you to a text archive. Find out how to fuck with fanfiction writers, eh I mean troll, of course. The text document you will find, will guide you how to code your bot. This bot was built with the knowledge from our pioneer in the forals of trolling. Spread the knowledge! For Chaos! |
| MadamScorpio chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 That was cute and hawt M |
| LemonMeringue77 chapter 1 . 7/22/2018 Beautiful. Passionate, and full of love. A true pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing your talent! |
| StarlingChild4 chapter 1 . 6/9/2018 THIS IS TOO MUCH! Long distant relationships always get to me anyway, and then you have him surprise her! And they have steamy sex! And then he proposes! TOO MUCH! I NEED TO BREATHE OMG! FLIRTY, SMUTTY, AND FLUFFY ALL IN ONE FIC I LOVE IT! |
| SplendentGoddess chapter 1 . 6/8/2018 Awwwww... |
| Black Tears chapter 1 . 6/4/2018 Um... can some one turn on the fan? Actually, screw that, SOMEONE TURN ON THE FUCKING AIRCONDITIONER BECAUSE HOT DAMN! It’s a thousand degrees in here, holy mother of god! Thanks for making me scream like the little fangirl I am... This is amazing though, but uh, *furiously fans self* |
| Mishelledor23 chapter 1 . 5/8/2018 MMMMMMMMMMM Army Inu! I could get used to that! |
| queenofbl chapter 1 . 5/5/2018 aww so sweet I've been here and you caught the feelings of that moment perfectly |
| Typicalyssa chapter 1 . 4/28/2018 Gosh, that was beautiful! |
