Eep keep updating this story has massive potential

Good four chapters

I must say I’ve just read all these chapters and for a 13 year old you are really good I’m almost 2 times the age of you and nowhere near as good as this

I am more confused as to why you would choose Diana as Sailor Moon’s final transformation. That would get confusing if the gray kitten Diana is in the area. I am not an Usagi/Mamoru fan. I would prefer her with Seiya in most instances - like this story for example. I do not want to see Minako ending up with Yaten. I prefer Kunzite, but since he is non-existent around this part of the storyline, she deserves a different male who is ‘actually’ male - not one who is technically female by can take a male form. In my mind - the Starlights are female and I don’t care if they take on male forms, they are not male.

Usagi with a backbone is fine, but sometimes authors tend to overdo it in my opinion (where she just flies off the handle and drags everyone into it - like you did). Again, Usagi (and all her aliases) is not my favorite character. I can’t stand her. Again, my opinion. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.

Yes, you definitely need to update again soon! Great chapter!

Keep up the great work!
~TRP~

minna means everyone not mina. This is messed up. Why is mamoru acting like a jerk to usagi and how can they still be together in the future and have chibi-usa if there relationship is what it is now?

I'm definitely intrigued!

Keep up the great work!
~TRP~

Nice story of course

I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

It’s not bad but it does need some work in places. Particularly you seem to have a habit of jumping from one thing to the next without much of a transition kind of left me a bit lost once or twice. It’s very point to point at times which isn’t necessarily bad but it doesn’t hurt to sometimes linger on something.

Second chapters a bit improved on this. But the first one it’s a bit noticeable.

Anyways I enjoyed it none the less and am curious where this is going. Even if I have my suspicions on a couple of things. Look forward to the next chapter!

Also you do realize you can PM your reviewers right? As long as they are signed in.

uhoh..that can't be good. well at least mamoru didn't go threw with the cheating.

TropicalRemix, thank you for reviewingyou'll have to find out after I upload the following chapters and stuff. I'm gonna tell you this though, he knew something was wrong, like beyond the fact that there was an attack happening. He sensed it. For this story though, Usagi and Mamoru will have a minor problem, jealously...I don't want to spoil it too much sooooo...(Don't worry, destiny will being them together again, no matter what)

why did mamoru tense up when setsuna showed up? does hhe have feelings for her or did he feel that something was wrong? I hope usagi and mamoru don't break up. There my favorite couple.