| Reviews for Step Up |
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   lostxinxthexdarkness chapter 13 . 11/17/2019 Good fic, a few typos (the only really annoying ones being the the usage of "though" and "thoughs"[which would be misspelled anyway] instead of the correct "those" or "those are/were"), but the story line overall was fairly solid, if not a bit too rushed. Keep up the good work. |
| wildbeast1498 chapter 13 . 11/13/2019 Loved the story! I’m really glad I found this as you posted the second part to it too! I can’t wait to see where you take this, please keep up the great work! |
| Dborn998 chapter 13 . 2/6/2019 Please tell me this isn't the end of the story... Would be a real shame if this is abandoned now |
| Imperator August chapter 13 . 2/3/2019 For your Step up sequel RONGO should be cannon. There aren’t enough Rongo’ out there and harem fix’s break the immersion. Plus Ron has embraced his Zorpox. Ron should use his power to unite the world as emperor after the Lowardian invasion declaring the birth of the First Terran Empire. Ron should do it through diplomacy to save it from itself as its infighting and divided nature leaves it vulnerable to attack and invasion. All Hail Emperor Zorpox! |
| Bobtrumpet chapter 13 . 10/13/2018 Nice ride! Looking forward to the rest, and future yet unwritten stories from you. Favorited. |
| Bobtrumpet chapter 5 . 10/13/2018 A little repetitive as the fight was mostly almost word for word from the last chapter. And it’s “through,” not “threw.” Threw is past tense for the act of throwing an object, which isn’t the case when you used it here. Otherwise good progress to the conclusion |
| Bobtrumpet chapter 3 . 10/12/2018 There can never be too many “Badass Ron” Stories. This is shaping up as one of the better ones. Just a few typos and awkward wordings, nothing too bad. I especially like the explanation in the prior chapter as to why Ron is the way he is. It makes a lot of sense. |
| camdawg chapter 12 . 9/18/2018 For the sequel I vote for Rongo or Warmonga if she’s an option |
| camdawg chapter 13 . 9/18/2018 Is there a sequel coming |
| dogbertcarroll chapter 13 . 8/8/2018 Satisfying ending. |
| Arashi Uzukaze chapter 4 . 7/28/2018 A naginata his a staff the can separate into three segments connected by a chain. LOLZ nope. What you just described is what's called a Triple Staff or Three Part Staff. A Naginata is a type of Polearm. |
| Reflective599 chapter 13 . 7/17/2018 Sooo...Sequel? New Chapter? This is way too god to stop here. |
| abdulbutler34 chapter 13 . 7/16/2018 So hyped for the sequel; I’m still up for Ron/Tara |
| Elay grimm chapter 13 . 7/16/2018 Me gustó el cap sería genial si lo actualizas y me encantaría que lo continúes |
| cabrera1234 chapter 13 . 7/16/2018 so the end when the squeal? |
