I thought Marley is an ordinary bloodline?

When will this story updated? After new year or before new year?

Nick and Frieda feel like Master Chief and Cortana.

I feel like the tampering would do literally nothing to stop him from acing the test since he's an Ackerman.

Keep in mind that this is only my personal opinion but I think you did exceptionally well in spite of how new you are to writing.

As for Nick,he did feel human like the other characters but he was way too OP.I'm hoping you can give him some more flaws like hints of cockiness or arrogance as he had to be extremely impressionable at such a young people within wall Sina especially the capital would have been the same way and that most likely would have rubbed of on least to some extent.

And one more thing don't be afraid to divulge from the canon is so much potential for Nick that otherwise might have been wasted given that you continue this please do put him to good use.

Afterthought:Maybe you could give Nick a sense of mentalism that he keeps improving upon as the story moves forward?
Just a suggestion,nothing more.

Just do what you have to do. I really liked what you had before. I understand that you as the writer want to make sure that it is amazing so I will be delighted for your next post.

I vote yes. This story has been interesting to me, and I’d love to see how you could improve it! I probably won’t start reading it until you get it to 6 chapters tho xd

That's a great idea, your story has potential that shouldn't be wasted. Some suggestions are

1) Nick - your MC is OP which is not a bad thing but look more into such stories as Overlord, One punch man or Mahouka. Writing a succesful story with OP characters is really difficult as they are no longer relatable, you need to create a character flaw. When Ackerman's gain powers, they sacrifice part of their emotions, its better to make him an anti-hero like Kenny.

2) Freida - while initially cute and funny, the interactions became more and more repetitive. Also due to bad timings it completely takes readers out of the story. Think to yourself when Nick really needs Freida.

3) Annie - In your story, Annie has crush on Nick (like pretty much every female, young or old) you could expand more on her inner dilemma as you see it.

4) Eren - He is a flawed character in the manga but is perfectly balanced by reasons of his flaws and the corresponding character development. This balance is bent in the anime and then completely destroyed in this fiction. For example if Annie did not teach him how to fight, there is no reason for him to hesitate to fight her.

Most importantly stop trying to bend the story towards cannon. Nick injures Levi in the forest just to repeat his actions and not let the story diverge. Give yourself more flexibility, let the story go where it wants to naturally for better or worse. Maybe humanity will win easily or maybe it will be destroyed, doesn't matter. What matters is story flow should be natural.

Also since its a harem, please add that to description and pay more attention to the personalities and interactions of the members.

Personally I don’t think I rewrite is necessary, I enjoyed what you are doing with this story and I think you could just keep on improving while continuing the original story. Just my opinion though

Man, fanfiction is where characters are same while story is different. You are writing the exact opposite, everyone is OOC and yet story is exactly the same. Dropping it.

Very entertaining chapter as usual

New chapter! Man Mike being here and alive does make a difference. Nick you crazy, pulling it in instead of using the blades. Hm, I bet him staring at the wall was Freida talking with him on what they should do. lightning doesn't strike twice, I'mma call bs on that one bertold, especially with you. Lol Nick's being protective not just in the vs warrior sense! Oh mannnn I really hope Mike and Nanaba make it through this! Their deaths were tbe worst for me from season 2. Yes Gelgar made it! HO LY FUUUUCK wasn't expecting her to come to that conclusion or say it out loud! I know two shifters who are gonna be piiiiiiissed. NO, she better not die here! Hm, I always wondered why her Titans clows weren't as developed as porko kr Marcel's, i always chalked it up to them receiving a serum like the one Eren swallowed to gain the hardening ability. Aaaah shit here comes the angry reunion time. Great chapter!

Wow rarely see a story with Frieda as the pairing I like it

Really like the way you got this story going

This is truly a great story