| Reviews for A Shift in Fate |
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N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 4 . 6/30 Now why do ya have to do me dirty like that. I was actually getting into this! Please continue! |
Teamdone36 chapter 4 . 11/3/2019 Plz continue |
mwinter1 chapter 4 . 2/6/2019 well this was a good start. almost a year since your last update. 2 more months to go to make it a year. Awaiting more. |
camp1500 chapter 4 . 11/24/2018 this is a good start, too bad you never completed it. |
Ranmaleopard chapter 4 . 10/12/2018 This is just really interesting keep it up |
Priest chapter 4 . 9/8/2018 The story is good so far. I think you could probably lengthen out your chapters is a bit more. Other than that I look forward to seeing more in the future. |
lnept chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 Lots of potential in this. I absolutely love the idea of Harry emerging from cryosleep millenia later. I hope this hasn't been dropped. Thanks for the read. |
WhereBeginningsEnd chapter 4 . 8/30/2018 This could be good. I like his curiosity about what he would consider "muggles" knowing about different species. Are you going to have him studied for a while and become a learned man then meet Padme? or is she going to seek him out having heard of him? I'm curious as to where you'll go. |
kelwin chapter 4 . 8/4/2018 good fic can't wait to see how it turns out. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/29/2018 A meter and a half is not average height. 1.76 m is the world wide average and even that could be considered rather short. In a futuristic society with excellent medical care and decent nutrition a human male would be considerably taller. If you want to use daniel radcliff as an example (which you should not) he would still be 1,65 m. I know americans are inexperienced with a civilized measuring system, but this is ridiculous. either call him short or adjust his height. |
Una Galaxia de Color Azul chapter 4 . 7/5/2018 cute and curious story |
ChrisW96003 chapter 4 . 6/28/2018 not to bad so far now I need MORE! thank you |
1529 chapter 4 . 5/30/2018 Another quick comment... Harry's reaction to the presence of the Gungans seemed a little odd, especially as he doesn't even know the details (he did, personally speak to a number of other species on Earth... from sphinx, acromantula, goblins, centaurs... another species shouldn't be that surprising). I look forward to seeing where this goes... although I really hope that Padme well not be subjected to Anakin (can't stand the narcissistic, selfish little¿. Thanks for writing. |
1529 chapter 2 . 5/29/2018 A couple of quick comments (I'm going to withhold my opinion on the Peverell name for right now) for chapter two. When the people first see Harry, you use 'dark black hair', I'm pretty sure any hair that is black would be darkSecond, the comparison is made to a warrior, but that is out of character for people from Naboo as they are pacifists. The comparison would probably be either to an athlete or, considering the scars, a barbarian or something similar... warrior just doesn't fit naturally into the Nubian psyche, at the very least three would probably be condescending or hesitant undertones to the term. Even without the Nubian tendency towards pacifism, any modern society not based around warfare and fighting would probably use athlete as the first thought rather than warrior (tailors would be an obvious exception... As would the Aldmieri). |
PascalDragon chapter 4 . 5/27/2018 Interesting beginning. I'm looking forward to see what abilities Harry has, in how far Earth plays into the past of the Star Wars galaxy and in how far Harry is going to influence the Star Wars canon :) |