Reviews for Ryoko Ishi
No One chapter 2 . 6/6
I'm sad that you're abandoned this story. Nevertheless, I thank you for giving a glimpse of a might be however short it is. Thanks and have a great days ahead especially during this weird time ;)
MoonflowerDaydreamer chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
This is really good
varee chapter 1 . 8/18/2018
Since lots of stones are magic stones, I hope you'll explain your choice in the future chapters.
I like the idea of Shisui showing up exactly when shit hits the fan; he doesn't exactly have any time to feel shocked before taking action, and by the time the was is over people will be acclimated to his presence.
Your narration seems a bit rushed; many times when Shisui thinks (or rather speaks to himself) can be resolved by using reported speech, and the characters will seem less OOC since the wording of their thoughts make up a LOT of personality (and messing that up just makes canon seems like OC).
I really am interested in the mechanics of Shisui's travel.
Hope you'll continue!
Cheers,
Varee
Tonegawa Rie chapter 1 . 7/3/2018
Yo! I need to remind you that I really like this story!

-hope you continue XD
StarshineRose18 chapter 1 . 5/31/2018
This seems like it will become a great story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
SkyblueNightingale chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
Really good!
Innocence and Instinct chapter 1 . 5/25/2018
You've hooked me on these time traveling stories. seriously.
Fonz chapter 1 . 5/24/2018
This was interesting! The last paragraph of the chapter felt a tad rushed compared to the rest but overall the story seems unique and I'm curious to see what happens next!
Tonegawa Rie chapter 1 . 5/24/2018
Aww I like this
Are you going to continue?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
That's a good beginning. Can't wait to see what happens next
Uchiha Misaki chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
Interesting
ViiA01 chapter 1 . 4/22/2018
Super excited to see where you take this! I've always wondered what would happen if Shisui was alive for the war.

Also, I love ShiSaku, so I can't wait to see his reaction to Sakura punching everything!
xXWinterRoseXx chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
Great start! I've never seen this type of plot idea with respect to Shisui before and I truly appreciate the fact that he is the main character. I can't wait to see how this will unfold.
Update soon, please! And thanks for sharing this with us.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
Nice