I enjoyed reading this story. I liked the idea of What happened with James and Liz and I didn’t mind the Harmony from childhood.

I wish there was more James and Liz. I thought it was a great setup that got lost later on in the story. I also wish more time was taken to wrap up the story. I loved the ideas but felt it stumbled over the finish line.

Would still recommend.

Damn Neville moves fast !

Yes, I can vouch for the beauty of the Loire valley. I've been there a couple times. The cosy towns, the majestic castles, the impressive nuclear power plant... *lol* It's been about twenty years ago so I forgot where exactly that was, somewhere upstream of Orleans, but I cherished the scenic sight.

""You know Snape?" James wondered." Erm, James should know that. If Lily and Snape were childhood friends, and that's something he knows, it's inevitable that Petunia knows him as well. Perhaps they weren't friends, perhaps they didn't know a lot about each other, perhaps they didn't like each other. But knowing? Yes. Most of my siblings' childhood friends I had almost nothing to do with, but I knew who they were at least.

Interesting story - but the last chapter was a bit 'rushed'.

One criticism: In Ch.26 you have Hr raving over NYC being "vastly bigger" (or words to that effect) than London. That didn't ring true, so I DID check internet, as Hr said 'they' should do.
While the small area of London known as "The City of London" has only about 10K permanent residents, 'London' and 'New York' have about 8.5M each. The NY 'Metropolitan Area' DOES have 20M to the London 'Metropolitan Area's 14.7M - but that's NOT what people think of as 'London' or 'New York' (and is only 1/3rd larger - not 'hugely' bigger).

I love this you even put in Harry/Hermione pairing too. Do a similar fic except this time do it for Lily/OC or Lily/Sirus but keep Harry/Hermione too

I have really enjoyed reading your Wonderful story. Thank you so very much for sharing it with all of us.

another good one, i like Ron bashing

I enjoyed the story. Thanks!

Okay... WHY did Hermione hit HARRY, her FIRST best friend since BEFORE Hogwarts, because of what RON said when she ran past the two boys? She could have at least waited to see how her 'best friend' reacted to Rons bad words about her, instead of taking Rons 'no wonder NOBODY likes her and considers her a nightmare' comment. What does she think Harry think Harry is to her, or the fact that they've been best friends for YEARS, before Ron came into the picture, if he really didn't 'like her' like Ron says?

Interesting story so far. I assume the scar on the other kids head is just a normal one and not shaped like a bolt of lightning. But from a distance fig won't notice. But won't she notice they are living to there new kid? Will the headmaster wonder why his compulsions didn't work?

Aw, I liked how you wrapped it all up. Yes, it was brief, but you gave us a glimpse into their future and I liked it. :)

Great tale enjoyed it very much didn't want it to end Thank You

Hoping Hermione soon goes to the bank and finds out if she has family vaults and inheritance

A werewolf is a danger to anyone around him...on the night of the full moon.

Any werewolf in a school should be required to leave on that night. Locked up, roam around, I don't care as long as they can't reach people.

I don't mean as long as the people stay inside locked doors, either. Accidents happen, especially around kids.