Maybe write another chapter? I mean this was great and very well concluded, and I enjoyed the realistic parts from the show. But I still feel personally that it would be great to read a follow up. Like another encounter From season four or since season five will be premiering soon (January 3rd) you could write a sequel then. But all in all great writing and fun read great job.

Perfect.

Okay, I liked this well enough; Bruce/Selina smut, if well done, is always appreciated. Having said that, might I suggest that you change the part about Bruce's penis to something at least slightly realistic. Not gonna lie, that part brought my enjoyment of your story to a screeching halt. Nearly the size of a girl 's underarm? I'm sorry, but that's beyond porn star ridiculous, and rather detracts from the sexiness. Same goes for the blowjob description, sounded rather hard to swallow, if you get my drift. Also, extremely unlikely that an inexperienced male youth would be able to pleasure a woman twice in a row without coming himself. Lemon works fine without leaving realism completely behind - anyway, just my two cents of course. But I feel you could really improve your story if you dialed it down a bit. Hope you don't think I'm trolling, just trying to leave some constructive criticism.

Please make another like this soon set after s3 e14 were an angry selina visits an injured bruce in bed and they end up making love

I love her teasing and seducing him

This was amazing, please write more

YES THIS IS EVERYTHING I WANTED AFTER THAT EPISODE. Thank you so much!

You are did a great job with this story. Please do more of Bruce and Selina.

I was hoping someone would do a story after Thursday night's episode. So wish this would have actually happened. Your writing is excellent. Thanks for the story!

Loved it

I definitely enjoyed reading this, I’m still so annoyed that we didn't get their kiss on tv so this helps.

Love it