Reviews for Fortune's Disfavored
arieldako chapter 6 . 4/9
shame... it's just that the chosen undead is very nerfed in this story... i mean come on he battled gods and giant abominations
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 23 . 4/8
huh.
Fredric chapter 1 . 4/1
It was a great adventure , even if I just started reading it five days ago .
I have to say , great work , no that's not enough , it was , Breathtaking , the craftsmenship of this story is fantastic , I am sad it has to end , it always does .

We can hope there will be a sequel , but please take your time if you do make one , you already killed youself making this story I'm sure XD . Now i can only hope the best for you , take good care you are a good man/woman , I'm sure we can all agree on that.

I'm sure your story made others feel better in their darkest time , it did for me , and for that I and we have to thank you .

Now I will go , I already talked enough , now to everyone be safe , take care and have a good day or night , Farewell .

And for you Author "hats of to you" good bye .
ToughDoggo chapter 23 . 3/27
Gotta say. This journey has been a great one. To not only feel alongside the characters, but to enjoy the entire thing the story makes up. No loose ties, no unsatisfying ending, and a story worth so much more than just a x-over fanfic. I can definitely see myself rereading this multiple times. Thank you.
weasel AKA boundedsumo chapter 23 . 3/22
Sooooooo, when the sequel? XD
NacNak chapter 23 . 3/19
Hm, that'll do Weiss, that'll do. You may yet hold hands with Sybil.

Now That's an Awesome Epilogue! Man, it's been a journey and I'm glad I came along for it, what a great story, freaking ten out of ten! Truly, it was outstanding.

I do dare to wonder, will there be a continuation? I'd be all for hopping on that train if it were to get moving, hehehe. That aside, I do wonder what will be next, until next time, Stay Awesome!
NacNak chapter 22 . 3/19
Sibyl no... *takes off hat and holds it close to chest*
David-san chapter 23 . 3/19
Thank you, honestly, thank you for finishing this story to the end, most writers create a great story and just leave it halfway through it or at the start. I cannot thank you enough for actually finishing it. Once again, thank you
Jebest4781 chapter 23 . 3/18
this was rather bitter, yet alright
Jebest4781 chapter 22 . 3/18
this was quite good of a chapter
vika832mlp chapter 23 . 3/18
Thank you for your dedication to finishing this story, thank you for allways pushing your self to improve, thank you for continuing to give life to the darksouls and RWBY communitys , thank you for even trying something new, and personally thank you for lifting me out of a dark place with this story. you are a wonderful person I wish you the most luck ang joy I could possibly wish and even more, this has been a most delightful joy to read.
Will there be any sequel's or new projects you wish to work on?
A person who adores your work
Sol D. Mars chapter 23 . 3/18
I usually dislike ambiguous endings, but ambiguous endings is what Dark Souls is known for. You really captured the tone of Dark Souls and RWBY without it feeling off, and I thank you for writing one of my favorite stories. Good luck in future endeavors!
Mister Cuddlesworth chapter 23 . 3/17
And a bittersweet ending, fitting of a Souls game. I must say, I'm sad to see the story end, as I always am, but it's good to reach an ending.

I look forward to more good stuff in the future.
Kirston - Ancestor chapter 23 . 3/17
Congratulations to you and everyone here for staying until the very end. While it is saddening to see the end, it's still just as rewarding and accomplishing. This is one of the best works around here and i hope you will carry this pride with you for a long time.

Once again, congratulations and thank you for your work

Sincerely: from me and everyone that had read
Rogue-eL chapter 23 . 3/17
Holy crap what a good ending to a great story. I hope to read more of your works. Praise the Sun and live on.
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