Reviews for Chosen of Alaya
Borello chapter 2 . 5/14
this story is very interesting. i hoped to read more chapter.
joshuafoster36 chapter 2 . 2/3
first of all if you do an op any character you don't buff up the villains. the reason being the op in the story summary would mean nothing. So next time if you choose to do a op character. Don't buff up the villains it makes absolutely no sense?
logan45 chapter 1 . 10/26/2019
pls continue this story
Mad Max chapter 1 . 6/28/2019
I'm glad you stop writing because you're stories are Bullshit that needs to be redone.
HistoricasLP chapter 2 . 6/16/2019
Will this story be updated or is it dead?
Guest chapter 2 . 5/21/2019
Update this story please it one of the greatest fanfic of naruto and type moon
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2019
Please continue this story it realy great can’t wait to see what happen next
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2019
REVIEW MY STORIES!

u/3211346
REVIEW MY STORIES!

u/3211346
REVIEW MY STORIES!

u/3211346
Ryu wolf chapter 2 . 4/30/2019
Awesome story I can’t wait to read the next chapter.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/11/2019
Can you please update this story soon it great
OuoborosJay chapter 2 . 3/31/2019
Amazing story so far definitely excited for more.
Please continue.
doubledamn chapter 2 . 3/31/2019
This seems interesting, and well written enough for me to get invested. I look forward to more.

Nice bit with Berserker, by the way, he couldn't think of something so it gave him the mindless beast. Clever.
Akashi1412 chapter 1 . 3/26/2019
Abandoned Story zzzzzz
slamkam12 chapter 2 . 11/13/2018
Can’t wait for the next chapter keep up the good work
deoxeyses chapter 1 . 10/26/2018
Very good
110 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »