Thanks

Good going.

The more i read your story, the more I like it! Good to see the poont of view of the others players, Willas is playing a dangerous game...

A very interesting take on things. I am most curious as to where you will take this. Love the idea and the writing is excellent.

Keep up the good work.

honestly, I love the idea of Ramsay being Jon's most loyal follower. Its fucking awesome.

Wow this is a first.

A Viserys with an actual personality? Interesting.

What the fuck... I can’t believe what I’ve just read. It’s amazing. You opened that wholesome and sweet moment between Jon and Dany in their room. Then we had that great confrontation between the three. Ramsay is hilariously dangerous. And you finish off with that scene in the chambers ? God damn that was a fantastic chapter !

What an intense chapter... in truly spectacular! Cat is so bitter and hateful... I loved to see Ramsay mess with her !

And damn, Ned told the truth! Wasn’t expecting that !

Really interesting chapter. Illyrio is one hell of a fool... bringing slaves in Winterfell, dear god..

I’m not sure what to think about Ramsay. He’s super loyal to Jon but he’s also super unhinged so... But if he works for the betterment of Jon’s cause then that’ll be awesome.

The smut was well balanced. Not too descriptive and crude but enough to know what’s happening.

Good chapter

Love the beginning !

Wonder if Jon Arryn will be assasinated, starting the original story's events.

Will Jon and Dany visit the Night Watch? Her uncle is there.

Normal stories, the kitten becomes Daenerys' companion. This story, it gets a slow and painful death.

Catelyn had great points about Lyanna, she caused a war because she fell in love with a married man. However there is still the ultrabig plothole of the original story with Lyanna and Rhaegar explaining themselves when the War started.

Ah yes, Ramsay's soul mate.

I'm sorry for Baelish if he ever crosses paths with Ramsay.

Arya is such a brat.