I actually like this story. Only three chapters in and you got my attention. Please continue soon! I wanna see more!

Huh, interesting... and it would certainly change quite a few people's schemes (the deluded Eldians that serve Marley under that crazy bastard Zeke, and the Reiss and their fellow Nobles and servants who are in the know but refuse to do the right things for their people.

Out of nowhere i had the urge to come back and reread this, and im so sad it was never continued! I was hoping that i had just missed an update or something...

Continue this, I really like the idea of it.

please update finally found an AOT fanfic that I have always wanted to read. Love the story so far and I am already fangirling on what will happen next

pls conitue this Story

Update pls

Great chapter keep up the good work! (~)b

Great chapter. Live the changes you've made to the story and looking forward to the next chapter.

Another interesting Chapter, I haven't had the pleasure of reading the first version but from the reviews I'm seeing here it must've been pretty damn good. and I somewhat agree with Crod42 because Rogue is that interesting of a concept with sentient Titans. Hell it was a concept I was also playing around with when I stated writing although I'm not sure I would've been able to Branch out such a concept like Rogues author did. Hmm so her father was the Armored Titan at that point, but was he in the Warriors program like Reiner was? or was he a random Eldians granted the power? From Klara's Titans description I'd love for her to meet my Oc shifter, so alike but so different from other Titans at the same time. Glad to see the sisters wanting to help the people in the walls, so many stories still make them out to be evil when in reality they haven't actually done anything and never could. the damn coward Karl Fritz doomed his entire race and millions of innocents with that oath to renounce war bullshit. Glad Grisha did what he did and what Eren is now doing. Again very interesting story you have here!

Hmm...they came to the walls after the breach. This is getting interesting!

I wonder what'll happen to the two now that they're inside the walls. Well, I mean of course I MAY know, but I want to see how differently it'll turn out compared to your previous story.

Keep it up!

So does klaras Titan for m look the same as it used to? Skin,was but with tons of armoured plates covering her body accept for the face which is a normal face? And what does Teresa’s Titan form look like? Also does klara know how to fight? Her father taught her in the original story didn’t he, is that the same here?

To say you caught my attention would be an understatement of the millennia, while I liked the first story of the Mother Titan, I like this one too, much more realistic than my own Nemesis Titan story in my humble opinion, if you have read it that is.

The Mother Titan and the Nemesis Titan would have been called the Deadly Alliance if these two were to meet. One with fragment memories, and one with the knowledge of the future that both managed to retain their humanity? Deadly Alliance indeed. but its a thought, dont take it too seriously. :)

Hi. I have not read the original, but excited to see the next chapters in the rewrite version! Your OCs seem to have a lot to be fighting for. Great start to this dark fantasy!

Tragic and horrifying life for sisters Klara and Teresa. The Marleyans will get their comeuppance sooner or later.