| Reviews for Team Naruto- Different Beginnings |
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Amaterasu53 chapter 3 . 7/25 I love this chapter |
Amaterasu53 chapter 4 . 6/26 that chapter is devastating! I loved the chapter where she finally gets together with Kakashi, but everything that happens before? You wrote it beautifully! |
James1996 chapter 4 . 12/22/2018 Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future. |
dbrame91 chapter 3 . 8/29/2018 Good chapter, glad to see an update. Just be careful of tense and POV changes. I only say them in Kakashi's section. But if Naruto guided them outside the office then it should be that she smiled at Kakashi. And it would be "my" office not "his" office, for perspective. |
James1996 chapter 2 . 5/20/2018 Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future. |