A shame it's been abandoned; true glory and valour not materialised in Stark hegemony over Westeros. Alas, it is not to be.

Wonderful. I must say, Jon Stark truly is wise a king - he seems to be following the Ottoman form of government, which if the Ottoman Empire is any indication of, is immensely successful. A Royal Household to rule them all. An Empire indistinguishable from that of its ruling dynasty.

If you're going to abandon story are you gonna delete it completely? I'll be honest I was enjoying the story. It's a real shame but I understand that sometimes people just stop enjoying writing. If you are going to abandon the story will you delete it completely. Hopefully you will decide to rewrite it some day.

Such a pity you've abandoned this story..Good read...Why would Jon let the spawn that is was beget from THE PSYCHO, SELFISH WHORE that is DANY rule when he could have one of his 'real' son's rule the south.. Just saying.. The son from Dany doesn't seem right either. Dumb move on his part there..

Interesting so far but too bad it's abandoned!

LOL..I feel like, I'm missing a big chuck of a story and a beginning one at that..

Awesome story so far.

I still can't believe that this doesn't have more reviews/favs/follows. When I found this, it was quite a surprise how that particular succession war and the Night Kings end was written. I guess no matter how many AUs, I read there was still some plot line based on either cannon book or the tv show and then I find this certainly interesting take on Lord Jon Snow/Stark like how are the R plus L going to relieved in this world or is an N plus A? Either way, I hope that you would be able to still continue this because it's nice and saddening that are just some amazing fics that have that variety enough to be the only fic in its existence with their plots (although, I think I have read a fic with a plot in a similar fashion to yours with Rickon as the vengeful lord or was I mistaken in that idea with this one since it was been a while that I first started reading this?). I hope you would come back to this soon!

Sin duda una interesante historia espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo.
Espero ver a Jon jodiendo a Johanna xD.

Love that story it’s a great fresh new take, one which I love. But I have noticed a small problem now that has the potential to become a big problem for you in the future. Every time something happens that makes Jon mad, you put a very heavy emphasis on how angry he is. Now I love that now but you keep amping it time it’s something that makes him madder that before and I love that. But the problem is that you set the bar very high as his “base level” of anger and I’m worried that you are not gonna have much room left to ramp it up to. Because let’s face it there’s only so many words that can be used to express anger and if you keep burning through them your not gonna be able to keep making him madder and still be able to represent it in a realistic manner. Again I love the story just trying to help you think ahead. Good luck and KEEP UPDATING

Oh my god that was awesome! Especially the end, I'm glad you're not making any of Jon's children into pussies as well as the legend of the Bloody Wolf has already begun.

Great so far, happy to read more

I love your version of Jon, having been here since ch1. Usually, I don't much care for non-canon characters, but Jon's children are brilliant. This is the Stark line that ruled the North for 8000 years.

Muito bom

Wow... This was chilling.
The youngest son so stilled in his resolution.

You need to update this more.