Shoot. This fic is really good! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow. This has really gotten me hooked. I need a new chapter.
Also, poor Zuko and Toph, forever pining.
Is this one of those fics where Bumi is actually Zuko's kid? If so, that's gonna be some juicy drama!

yeah there were emojis and spaces in there; it's not supposed to be an un-intelligable blob of text haha! Hope you can make sense of what I reviewed anyways

Live-review? Live-review. okaylove/ the use of italics and boldface. Boldface is rarely used in a way that's aesthetically pleasing, but this does it PERFECT. "as long as this reality had food, it was content." Ok, me? 100% relatable.I don't know how long you waited between writing each chapter, but I /already/ see improvement from the already amazing writing. The language used appeals AMAZINGLY to pathosit's very emotionally charged and in just the right way!There's more description in the emotions and thought process than the physical appearance, and that alone makes it stunning. The emotions are so much /more/ than the physical beauty and shape.I'm diggin' the fight scenepersonally, I find fight scenes the hardest things to write /ever/. You've done a brilliant job here!"I'll aim lower to keep you quiet" ooh girl, get it! Wreck him!Love that Toph touched his face, just to see what changed."little-big girl" is the cutest nickname. I'm normally not a big fan of boob and butt talk, but I do appreciate Toph making jokes about hers to Aang about The young boys . Bumi talking about Zukos cool fire bending .'It' is about to /munch/ and /crunch/. Love it so far! keep it up!

very very good! I appreciate the detail in the setting especially! I'll comment more on the next chapter since I still got a ways to read but all in all great job!

Things seem...peaceful enough. It's nice seeing everyone in a stable state after everything they went through in the series. Though I'm sure that's not going to last long, especially for Aang and katara. On that note, it is nice seeing their familial interactions.

What design will "It" have?
1990?
2017?
Something else entirely?

I like the story so far, it's just so hard to see Katara happy with Aang with the way canon showed it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Interesting so the marriage and such went on like it did in Korra yet it seems Karata an Zuko and Aang and Toph may be harboring regrets. I'm very eager to see where this goes and what happens to make them go to who they should have been with. Great job bro.

So the beginning sounds very promising.
Please continue writing quickly.

The first chapter is interesting and sets up a nice low for the story. And the murder of the man in the last scene sets up the horror very well!

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I love the idea of this crossover! Such an interesting combination of fandoms and having Republic City as the setting is a clever choice. I haven’t read many stories that set between ATLA and Korra in the timeline, so I’m excited to see where you head with this. As for a first chapter, this did a great job at setting up the character dynamics 10 years on from the end of the show – giving an idea of their personalities and the complicated relationships between some of them. The choice to have the “IT” aspects subtly overlay within the last part with Zuko, and then taking control in the last scene was great and I loved that final scene with the vagrant and the ominous build-up to the feast in the tunnel.

I enjoyed seeing the characters interact together, and the lead-up to Katara and Aangs’ wedding was a great place to start – gave an interesting starting point for all those unresolved feelings. You did a fantastic job with Toph, she had some of my favourite lines of the chapter. I really liked the "Twinkles 'intimidating'? Please, Momo was more intimidating than him."

I liked the subtlety in the scene between Zuko and Katara, the hints that there’s something there without it being overtly stated – i.e. Katara straightening up at the mention of his name, the soft smiles, "Aang is really lucky to have you" and the “I'm...really happy for you" was all well done, and gave a sense of the things that were lurking behind their words. Ozai’s fate was interesting, I don’t think I’ve seen that being his outcome before and I liked the tie-in to Zuko feeling guilty because he’d tried to keep his father away from Azula and believed that action had been responsible for it.

Adored what you did with Sokka and Sukis’ relationship, the discussion about the Kyoshi Warrior roleplaying was entertaining (and Toph’s use of “Fan Girl"). The food stealing had some of my favourite moments of this chapter, in particular because of the return of the “man purse”. You nailed Sokka’s character. I loved this bit – [Sokka shrugged. "Suit yourself." he popped it in his mouth.] – I could picture him saying and doing this. Also loved Aang’s "That still doesn't sound manly in the slightest" in response. Sokka’s interaction with Toph about Suki looking for him was great – her simple “Zuko” in response to his questioning was a highlight, as was his use of “two-timing Hot-Head”.

Really enjoyed the scene between Toph and Aang, both Toph’s brashness and confidence and Aang’s awkwardness was adorable, and there was some good chemistry there, even amidst their confused feelings. I particularly liked the "You know, staring is kind of rude, Twinkles" and “And actually, yeah, I don't want the headlines to read 'Chief of Republic City Flashes Everyone at the Avatar's Wedding’”. Having Zuko and Toph be two peas in a pod in the aftermath was well done, especially Zuko’s “Huh?” and Toph’s "I'll let you figure that out”.

And, as I mentioned above, the last scene was a very strong introduction to Pennywise. I loved the brilliance of the shooting star in Zuko’s scene, which moved into increasingly sinister undertones from the vagrant’s scene. Liked this bit – “The thing was morphing as it floated – floated – into the sewer tunnel”. The use of primal grunts, and the speed with which the vagrant was grabbed was well done. This was an excellent line – “The man didn't have time to scream. He was pulled, flown into the darkness, his fate sealed as a loud crunch echoed throughout the tunnel.” Ending on the silence was a great touch! Enjoyed this, looking forward to seeing where you head from here!

Okay so I love the introduction a lot! The wedding makes me so sad, knowing Zuko and Toph are both experiencing the same thing. I love how well-written it is and I was sad to see the first chapter end :(

Okay, so I’m totally hooked on this story idea. I liked seeing the Gang like 10 years or so down the road, I haven’t read too many like that and it’s neat seeing them so different yet still the same in so many ways. I think you got all them down very well (all in character) and it was great to see the unspoken tension between Zuko and Katara and Toph and Aang. Toph had some really great lines in this chapter too.

Of course, I ship Zutara hardcore so it’s frustrating to hear about Katara and Aang getting married...but maybe things won’t go off as planned huh? Interested to find out ;-)