| Reviews for Broken Bonds, Strengthened Bonds |
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Guest chapter 3 . 1/25/2019 Please update the story |
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 2 . 11/14/2018 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/22/2018 Please update the story |
Anonymous Person chapter 2 . 6/17/2018 Just did a legendary count, total came up to 11. Considering he has 53 in total that means that almost 1/5 of all his pokemon are legendary. Yep, that guy is a legendary magnet through and through. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2018 Please update |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2018 Please update |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/20/2018 Please update |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/18/2018 Please update |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/18/2018 Do you realize that both Rockruff and Litten had evolved right? |
Colton Fox chapter 2 . 4/18/2018 I have an interesting idea for a fairy tail story. |
carneyjarred chapter 2 . 4/19/2018 Good story unlike other batrayel fics have misty, max, and iris reearn his friendship and have darkrai cause them them to have nightmares and the lake trio showing them would have happened if they didn't meet ash such misty never meeting togepi and max never meeting jiratchy and iris never getting the confindenc to face drayden. |
GenX567 chapter 1 . 4/19/2018 If I might add when it comes to grammar, Pokémon are both common and proper nouns. It really doesn't matter if you capitalize them. Elmo complains about it because they are using a very old grammar handbook. Grammar changes with the English language after all. |
SpiritsOfRhythm chapter 2 . 4/19/2018 Super convenient the way Guardian ash stepped in, also, please just put the pokémon list in your bio or somewhere else please. |
SpiritsOfRhythm chapter 1 . 4/19/2018 Dragon’s Blaze I say listen to St. Elmo’s Fire about formatting and grammatical tips. Everything else he says are optional because sometimes he complains about clichéd storylines |
twilightsagarules chapter 2 . 4/18/2018 So cool I !ov e it |