Enjoyed this story, would love you to write a Troi/Picard pairing, my favourite pairing not enough stories on them as a couple.

well done!

The charactorisatin in the story is spot on. The conversation between Picard and Troi are geniune, making it very easy for the reader to believe that it could have taken place.

I also like the end scene in which Troi tells Picard good-bye. Having seen Nemesis, the scene of Troi departing was never shown, robbing fans of saying good bye to a key charactor.

Critique: Of all the stories that deal with the violation of Troi, I have never read one in which Troi actually seeks counselling. This is necessary for the mental well being of any rape victum including Troi. The question, "Who counsels the counsellor?" needs to be answered. I find it ridiculous that Troi is exempt from treatment. A good cry on the holodeck is fine and good, but it does not replace therapy.

Despite this, the story is still a good effort.

Great job! This story is awesome!

The movie always felt so incomplete in the end. This is perfect, cause it fills in the "blanks". Well-written, good storyline, I like the "moments" you gave them. The moments of saying goodbye and all that. The thoughtful ones.

Good story!

That was a great story! really well written, and very focused on the issues at hand. Nice Job!

I live this story! It reduced me to tears!

oh wow, this was a great story, so sweet; I love the family feeling in these types of stories and also that same feeling that was apart on the show :) I also love those 'father daughter' moments.

Well, since you like reviews so much, I'll throw you a bone ;)

I liked this story, very 'angsty'. You're really good at writing angsty stories. A few errors I noticed (sorry, nitpicking, but this stuff bothers me)- you put 'trashing' when I think you meant 'thrashing' a couple of times, and the way you worded a few things (soon-to-be former XO, s-t-b former CMO, etc.)was a little confusing sometimes. You did bring out the friendship and 'support line' that Deanna and the Captain have, which was very good and worked well. keep on writing!

Kee

Emotionally, this is one of the best stories I've read. The power of the changed relationships and the reactions of the individuals involved is fantastic. I'm at a loss for words to say how much I enjoyed reading this. Just "wow."