Ugh! You tease! I love it and I want more! I hope you continue this story.

Aaaaa! I was not expecting that ending, but I loved it! This was a fantastic story, very well written, and I hope to read more from you *hint hint hint* in the future. :)

I have questions! Will Ben live? In the last part, is Rey refering to his death? Answers!

Wow, that was an amazing opening! I absolutely love your style! You write in a way that is intimate, slightly gritty, and very immediate, but also correct and smooth (huge kudos for using the present/past correctly - it might sound silly, but I think that's difficult, since it's still comparatively new in story-telling and so it's easy to get it muddled with the usual past/pluperfect - and this is a completely random detail, but I love that you differentiated between "jealous" and "envious"). I think your characterization is spot-on, too! Drunk Rey is so much fun...I felt like I was staggering along with her, trying to find her room, and the 'fresher scene was vivid enough to turn my stomach. Well done. :)

I'm so glad I found this! I'm looking forward to reading more!

That was not an ending I was expecting. Will you write a sequel?

Nice to see an update. Wanna read more.

Im very interested in how this will play out. I find it amusing that were stilk in the same scene of the story.

Oh that was hot

loving this. well worth the wait for chapter 2 I'd say.

Interesting...

ooohhh so close to a kiss... drunk Rey is great and I did love that Ben wouldn't take advantage of her...

I really need to read more! This is so good

ha ha ha ... you need to continue...

Pllleeeeeeeaaaasssseeeeeee go on with the story!

update! i loved this!