Reviews for Tune
PolkaCat chapter 1 . 1/7/2019
Honestly, I think the Lukanette ship is adorable. While, it probably won’t be a long term deal canon wise, I think it’s great for Marinette.
I loved your story, and thought it was really sweet.
Helpful tip: I had a little bit of trouble keeping up with which messages were sent by who. Something I’ve seen in the past for stories like this that works really well is putting the first letter of the characters name and a dash in front of the message. So, for Marinette it would be something like M-
Hope this is helpful for you! Keep up the good work!
UntitledFiction chapter 1 . 10/16/2018
This is such a cute story, and I remember reading it several weeks ago after his first appearance on the show. I think these two are adorable. And also, just wanted to say thanks for your comment on my Lukanette story. I drew some inspiration from this in the beginning so thanks so much!
Lucky-Racer chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
This was SUUUPER sweet, I think I might get a cavity! I loved it :) As you know I am DEFINITELY on the Lukanette ship. ALL ABOARD! LOL.

My only advice would be to watch what tense you are using; you mostly used the past tense - which makes sense. However, for the story to really flow, everything should be - for example "Luka C. has a facebook" should be "had"; unless you're explicitly saying that's what Marinette was thinking at the time, it makes sense for her to think in the present tense, but you'd need to denotate that either with italics or quotations or whatever. However, in the context of "Luka C has accepted your friend request", that particular line makes sense because it's her phone telling her in the present tense.

The Messenger exchange was good, it was just unclear at times who was talking. But it was cute.

Overall I really enjoyed this story and I am going to follow you. You have a lot of potential! Keep it up! :)
ducodnamoreemia chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
God this is cute.
Pokelover619 chapter 1 . 4/26/2018
This was adorable. I just love the chemistry between this two. You did a wonderful job on this story. I hope we can get more like it.
Lara D chapter 1 . 4/23/2018
Aw frick that was too cute. I love this ship, (I use it to cope for the lack of progress in the main ship lol) and you did a really good job representing them with what we've seen of Luka so far. Keep up the good work!
~Lara
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2018
This is by far, actually the best lukanette fanfiction I've read at all so far. I loved how he was kept in character. I think lukanette is just so cute. I can never get enough of it. -
asteroulik chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
This was so adorable...
amykaysh chapter 1 . 4/18/2018
this story is so utterly beautiful. and it's something we do all the time which makes it so relatable. I love it
FicsFromAnAnbuNin chapter 1 . 4/18/2018
This was an amazing fic, I wish it was longer. I'm looking forward to more Lukanette stories.
9YearsOfMaka chapter 1 . 4/18/2018
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS OMG BEKSKHRMAJCMSKSHSBS! BLESS YOU! I THINK I LEFT MY HEART ON THIS FIC! Please update ASAP! I love Lukanette and I don't care if they judge! I can always ship as many as I like. There's nothing wrong with that! I'm a Solid MariChat shipper but that doesn't mean I have to critize other ships. I MUST TASTE NEW FLAVOR! okay that sounds so wrong. (or its just me) Continue writing! I'll be waiting! *Winks with both eyes*
StellaWolf chapter 1 . 4/18/2018
i'm not opposed to the Lukanette ship! this was quite adorable, and i'd love it if you had a continuation. no matter how short it may become