Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and I love the pack dynamics and that Jaune has the scars as proof of his position as alpha and I can’t wait to see what the girls will have to do if they want to be with jaune

I love raptors.

You have created raptors !

I like how Jaune is a mix of Alan Grant and Owen and I hope that the story continues.

One Question: Is Jaune gonna have a harem or not?

Not bad i really like this story i havent read many jurrasic world crossovers but this is the best one ive read cant wait for more

Great History. It's very intereesting to see Jaune like a mix between Alan Grant and Owen.

I love this so far! Definitely in my top picks for crossovers.

well this is interesting very interesting I like blue's thinking bend over or die

This story is really good, I hope you continue it.

Nice concept, hopefully you update soon

Good story. Its interesting to see Jaune as an Alpha but it does make sense. Never would have thought of something like this and can't wait to see how you continue.

Awesome idea. I hope you continue.

good so far hope you keep it up

I love with what you're doing here. I love the idea of Velociraptors in the RWBY universe. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!

love this story so far please keep on writing more i would love to read more of this love it so far keep up the great work and i hope to read more soon!