Cuteness overload!

I'm pretty excited to read the full story on this. I really love your writing style. It flows very nicely and is overall very consistent. I love how you made Naruto seem like well a little kid as he's struggling to read. That's pretty cute, but a little sad since he never had anyone to help him learn. The word choice seemed to reflect Naurto's age, which is a cool aspect to your writing style. I will definitively being looked for the multi-chapter story.

I enjoyed reading this one!