Yes, i have one small remark: You have mentoned chloe's truck to be an automatic transmission a few times, while in the game art, and in the game, it is clearly a manual transmission.

As someone who's into cars, it ticks me off

loving the story so far tho

Hi again, been a while...

Just finished reading the Story for the 4th time during its making. Now finally complete. I think it has now been a good 2 years... damn, how time goes.

I will make this short. There are parts which I love and parts which I think are not optimal. Some Scenes which were over the top and overdramatized. The earlier parts were better in my memory and I see now a lot of room for improvement. Neverthless it is a really nice story. And I enjoyed reading it. I love some of the later chapters. You used a lot of different styles and perspectives. The ending was a bit sudden. There is this feeling that a chapter is missing before the epilogue.

I am glad that I waited for it to be completed, before reading it again, as the cliffhangers would have killed me...

Thank you very much for the hard work and the beautiful story. And my best wishes for the future.

With best regards,

Hithilion

Very good job on the story, well done!

i love this story (second read through) but this chapter still feels icky. i think i get what you were going going for but bottom line is cloe got with max under threat of suicide... ive seen mainy bad relationships continue under such threat and while these are extraordinary circumstances its still messed up all the same

you get what im saying?

Absolutely fantastic have had this open since you started it enjoyed every chapter thank you.

It was a great journey you took us on. Thank you for writing this story!

Thank you so much for writing this. It’s seriously been the best, while I’m sad to see it gone it has been incredibly enjoyable to read

I have read many fanfics in my time being on this amazing website, many of them were great but, this is just simply amazing. I can safely say that this is one of the best if not the best fanfic that I have ever read. Thank you for writing this masterpiece and dedicating so much time and effort you have put into it. Have a merry Christmas and a happy new year.

Doumo Arigato. This is my absolute favorite LiS fanfic and I will miss it. Btw I am half way through my first YA romance story. I still may do my BtS ep3 AU reboot project. Thanks for the inspiration.

Kind of jumped over the fallout from last chapter but this one was good regardless

though its sad to see a good story come to an end, congrats on making it

This is one of the best LIS Fics I've ever read. Thanks for the read, it was great!

I have to say it was an absolute pleasure and a privilige in reading and contributing my (meager) part to this absolutely awesome story.

You hit my preference right on the head with this fic, right from the very beginning. And you have a lot to show for yourself with this story and the others.

Thank you so much!

(And yes, I will get back to it when I find the time and the right pinch to write on. :P)

I get this is the finale, but that ending, everyone disappearing, what is the explanation there?

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Didn't go through all of this for Max to die. :(

Oh my way too dark