Reviews for Dumbledore's Secret
HoneyBear84 chapter 1 . 5/25
Love it and seriously wish it was longer or had a sequel about how they defeated Voldy ect
Inoeth chapter 1 . 5/14
This was an excellent and very believable version of an entirely human and fallible Dumbledore who is neither perfectly good nor evil. It really makes me want to see the rest of this story play out in a longer form.
mcepl chapter 1 . 5/13
Thank you very much. This is truly one of the most true portraits of him as I see him. Thank you.
SnarkyAndProudHufflepuff chapter 1 . 5/12
No! I want more! This feels so good compared to the usual, let's bash Dumbledore! I hate Dumbledore bashing, but I love this, it wasn't bashing him, more of admitting that you're not perfect, and as Dumbledore said trying to change.

Thank you so much. I love Dumbledore, and hate how often people bash him. I can understand to a point, but he's just human, he makes mistakes too.

Wish this was like a prologue to the story.
Harrison Black Peverall chapter 1 . 3/24
Excellent story. I liked it.
Osmodious chapter 1 . 9/4/2019
Wow...a Dumbledore it is actually possible to respect. That’s pretty unique in fanfiction (they are usually Dumbles The Secretly Evil, Dumbles The Well Intentioned Manipulator, or Dumbles The Ludicrously Saintly...caricatures, in other words). Good stuff, thanks for posting!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2019
I don't remember the last time I have seen such an beautiful portrayal of Dumbledore. Truly a great work.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2019
Amazing one-shot. Honestly the tone and feel of this could have come straight from Rowling herself. Only you have Dumbledore make actually sensible decisions. Great work.
Slytherin Potter chapter 1 . 5/10/2019
Greatest rendition Albus I seen in a long time. Sick of the Dumbledore.. shits getting old (no pun intended) real quick. Like we get Albus has done some questionable things in the books but In the end the man is still human give him a break.
Ivarr chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
Well done! I would enjoy a follow up set of drabbles showing snippets of the summer through the conclusion of the struggle.
Q.Elwyn.D chapter 1 . 3/30/2019
Truly sympathetic Dumbledores are strange and rare. But this here is one, captured not as the master manipulator that the last two books turned him into, but as the overwrought old man who had been pushed too far, in ways he was meant to handle.

While he certainly manipulated Harry's life up until here and has hardly redeemed himself, this Dumbledore has earned sympathy, and perhaps pity.

A beautiful characterisation of a character I normally hate.

Q.E.D
Victory in Chains chapter 1 . 1/21/2019
Favorited.

This is the best fanon interpretation of Dumbledore I've ever read. It's very easy to vilify Albus, because when you read HP from an adult perspective the whole series becomes quite horrifying, as most child hero series become.

This is a nice, honest look at Dumbledore though, and I wholly approve. There is at least one minor grammatical issue (a change of tense near the end), but technically the writing is meritorious. Further you resist the temptation to turn the story into something it's not - it's so easy in this kind of scene to turn the whole thing into justification for Harry's misadventures from birth to the present moment.

In summary, it's really a lovely little piece, and I'm glad to have read it.
Vladimir Mithrander chapter 1 . 1/12/2019
That was very deep.
tricorvus chapter 1 . 1/10/2019
THIS
For the Greater Goat chapter 1 . 1/9/2019
This is Dumbledore's character. While fanfiction might have alternatives (I'm fond of a delusional Dumbledore), this is his character.
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