I like where this is going. It needs an update and soon hopefully.

Interesting concept. I'd love to see more.

Agent Scifi Maniac
Halo has cheap motion sensors. There are literally countless examples of them detecting ships by gravity and measuring their mass accurately. On the other hand, late war ONI stealth corvettes have active camouflage, which is reverse engineered from Forerunner tech and is likely as good if not better than Minbari stealth, which can't even hide their ships on the visible spectrum. For Minbari ships to still be visible without being where they appear to be using telescopes, they would need a gravity well similar to the singularity of a black hole, which would stop lasers and any weapons sent at them anyway. Since to hit a black hole you have to fly directly at it. They aren't even painted black, it's deep space ffs, you can see reflective things far easier than non-reflective things, a reflective surface would only confuse lasers used in LIDAR, not a telescope.

Also I'm pissed you deleted that conversation, I hadn't saved those links, I have no choice but to conclude you are a troll.

Well, an interesting read to be sure. While the flow is a bit odd at times, jumping back and forth in time, I understand the entire situating would be a bit confusing to write. That being said, grammar and diction are very good. That's high praise btw. The story is interesting and I would love to see it continued.

Really hoping for a new chapter. To the last reviewer, have some suspension of belief dude. Would you really want to read a one dimensional story about the UNSC being outperformed by another government in all aspects? Its not interesting in incredibly boring. I am glad that this author did not fall into that pit.

If the Earth Alliance -who have TACHYONIC RADAR- can't break Minbari stealth, then the UNSC sure can't have a snowball's chance ON THE SUN to break it. Oh, and the Prowler would be detected outright thanks to Minbari sensor tech...

Fucking love this story, great idea and i love the way it's playing out. Don't sell yourself short, your a great writer and I'm constantly interested and wanting more. Don't leave me hanging without a UNSC and Minbari meeting, that would be hilarious as well as awesome to read.

cool

Could we have these talks between the two be extended in the next chapter? These cliffhangers are killing me.

I really look forward to how the story progresses, keep it going please.

Keep it up :)

Well if need be the unsc already has a way to have MAD with any of the B5 powers what with nova bombs and prowlers... So those poor minbari and other power are not going to like this when they find out... But what are they going to due? Risk losing their homeworld

Keep it up :)

I am so glad you are continuing this story I look forward to where you take it.

I'm liking the potential of this story, please keep it going and continue soon.