How could anyone call you a bad writer?! They're the idiot, not you
This was really sweet! It's nice to see Hopper and El have a strong bond
Totally don't blame El for lighting up the bunsen burner xD we all know Troy is a mouthbreather

You're not a shit writer. You're actually pretty good. But the characterizations in your stories feel consistently off. Jane acts a good 3-5 years younger than she should. (I can't imagine the Eleven who coldly tells Kali "I've killed before" whining to Hopper, "Tell him that's not nice!") Hopper is way more cuddly and patient than the guy on TV. Joyce is way more chill. And so on. This is pretty much Stranger Things if it were a sitcom in the mold of Silver Spoons.

I bother to write this because you *are* a good writer, and I think you'd turn out something really great with just a little more faithful observation of the characters. Hope to see it one day.

You are a shit writer, you know that right?

LOVED THIS LOVED THIS LOVED THIS!
El is too pure for this world!

Please update soon

At some point Eleven is going to need to share all of the pieces of her life with Mike, but I think the day she introduces him to Teri will be a difficult one. Even though Mike knows on an intellectual level the things Brenner and Co did, actually seeing Teri is another story.

Love your story thanks for the update...

So much fluff!

Don't apologize for the (relative) lack of Mileven, the relationship between El and Will is much more interesting and fun, and it's what keeps me coming back to this story. Will dealing with any new sibling is going to be a story worth telling, let alone someone as ... unique as Eleven.

Ahhh! I love Hopper so much.

So cute! Update soon!

I had to laugh at overcompensate as a word of the day.

I love the sibling relationship between El and Will. I really hope it will be like this in the show kinda

Ghost Rock, i don't think there needs to be a bad guy. The story is plenty captivating.
I really love that Hoppers dad is back. I honestly enjoyed his visit in the last book. Keep up the good work

I love the story so far I read the previous one and I’m caught up on this one the way the characters act and interact with each other really feel like how they would act in the show, the only criticism I have is that there is no ultimate bad guy which leads to a lack of tension in my opinion, I would really like to see some ultimate goal that everyone is striving for like defeating the smoke monster from season 2, of course I’m not telling you how to write your story you do what you want, I just wanted to give a tip to make the story more captivating.