You start stories so strong and fast, then peter off into molasses with them. Shame, as this one had really started to gain some good momentum at its height.

Super in love with this story! I can't wait to see what happens next. please update soon!

Oh yes, Walter Frey is the textbook definition of the word “asshole”. I was SO HAPPY when Arya ended that bastard’s life!

The story is getting pretty interesting, I love the way you write each character

Dumbledork the idiot of the Century.
Snaper the guy that should die at the start of the movie.
Moldyshorts do I even need to say what needs to happen?
Harry the ultimate hero humble yet scarce.
Hermione the one that should of captured Harry's Heart.
Ron the bigot who has no right to Herimone
Luna the calm yet crazy in her mind.
Fleur I honestly don't know about her...

Great story, hope you come back to it.

Hope you come back to this

I loved it, I hope the next update as soon as possible

Please post more

considered bad form, lol

i think it was important to know the history so she can learn from the mistakes of the past.

please update, it's great

Fun read. Really enjoying this version of Dany, who’s more self aware and self critical, yet her relationships have enabled her to blossom somewhat. Nicely done

Good work

Jon Arryn calling Baelish a 'prick' even in his own mind seems a bit out of character considering it was Jon Arryn himself who raised him to the position of Master of Coin if I remember right.