An interesting, and as far as I can tell, somewhat unique approach to the Dark Moon Crisis.

Personally, I'm kind of curious as to how long it will take Usagi to figure out the child's parents - she is far more intelligent than people give her credit. I can't imagine Mamoru has had enough time yet to process any of this, so I'll put my money to Usagi's name.

A relatively error-free story, as was the first installment; watched.

Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei

Why didn't I find it earlier? It's SO good, I really love the way you changed canon (relationships in this little family are the best). And all of the character's reactions are so real and understandable, especially secondary characters: senshi understand that Chibiusa is part of their world and their responsibility as well as MamoUsa's, Ikuko is scared because her daughter's boyfriend adopted a child and she wants them to understand the weight of this decision and Motoki is just the best boy as he usually is. Unfortunately English is my second language and I can't express all the feeling I have for this work, but I hope that someday I will found out how this story ends. I'm so excited to know about how long Chibiusa is going to live with Mamoru, will she find out that Mamoru and Usagi are her young parents and what happened to Endymion for God's sake!

Thank you for the fascinating take on the black moon arc so far. I especially love how Chibi is reacting to the attack as well as the effectiveness of the black moon clan. Hope you have a nice day.

holy wow this is so good! the R arc was one of my favorites, so seeing a rewrite of it like this is so exciting! I'm both dreading and looking forward to what the scouts of the past are going to have to deal with when the black moon clan shows up. esmeraude using a disguise to get mars to spill everything was so clever I almost yelled!

thank you so much for writing this, this is amazing! can't wait to see what happens next!

I really enjoyed this chapter. The girls are awesome giving Mamoru a baby shower. I can't remember, but did Motoki learn about their identities in the previous story? I do wonder why Usagi's mom refused to babysit Chibiusa? Looking forward to the next chapter!

I absolutely love this story! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

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Cliffhanger!
Loving the way the senshi have come to the rescue and everyone’s emotions are at the surface. Makoto recalling her own experiences and Mamoru reliving his own. You’re amazing as usual.

Update! I’m totally digging the cold shoulder from Ikuko right now in an angsty way lol no fun in it being smooth and lovey dovey :)

Wow I loved this! You must be such a good parent to write something so heartfelt as this!

Kids are HARD. I don't blame Mamoru one bit for how he's acting. The senshi are so incredible and thoughtful. I've been told I think like I man so I probably never would have thought to do those things for him.

Eagerly awaiting that next update!

Wonderfully written as always! Can’t wait for more!

Poor Chibi-Usa. She just wants her mommy.

Huh...childcare sucks in Japan too eh? That's the thing about two working parents.

_ Dang...Chibi-Usa has...issues with the princess thing

Motoki: "Your life is so strange." - understatement of the century, holmes.

Of course Motoko would know a thing or two. Smart lady.

This is why Minako is the best waifu sometimes...look at her go! Referencing her future version.

*sighs* Credit where due...Esmeraude is...smart

This is so cute! I can’t wait for the next part!

ok so I hit the character limit again lol. But this time I was smarter and copied my review in case it gets eaten so here you have me braving the log out button (I'm always terrified I won't ever remember my password again lololol) and pasting the rest lol:

...and oh the jump in my heart when I realised that the torture you'd warned about was FUTURE VENUS AND THAT YOU GIVE US A GLIMPSE INTO WGAT HAPPENS IN THE FUTURE HERE. Your VENUS is spectacular here and so is all the bit about Demande and his obsessed love especially when viewed through the lens of Venus and esmeraude. wow. and god am I proud of your Venus and her strength! (And it makes SO much sense to have the senshi captured like this! after all, if they did run around, they could have at the very least answered some of these recordings from Chibs even if the answer would have come from the wrong person!)
AND ESMERAUDE DISGUISING AS VENUS FOR MARS? YOU FIEND MY HEART XD.

and Lolololol I am so endlessly amused you used a random rank generator (and its options lolololol)

damn. this is so good. this is so endlessly good. I am so pleased and so happy and so thankful that you are writing thisnfic and that you write for my fandom and that I get to call you my friend and that amazing insightful warm and heartfelt content is something that I can just read on the friggin internet because you put it there and wow. thank you.