I love this story. You are a great writer. Yoy should post more stories.

I'm sad to see it end, but you did a great job wrapping it up. I sure do love a happy ending! Thanks for taking the time to share your story!

Oh my, it makes me nervous. I hope no one will be hurt (except the pirates, of course). Don't play with magic, you fools!

This is getting sooo good! I don't know what's going to happen next, but I can't wait to find out! Great job on another chapter!

Love it! Please update soon:)

Interesting, Eric has a brother and did Eric's father steal the Crown of Athena from the pirates that killed her?

This just keeps getting more intricate and interesting! It was interesting to find out what the captain thinks is the treasure. Wow! And I totally loved how all of the tough pirates were hanging on Ariel's every word at storytime Lol. As always, I'm looking forward to the next chaper!

Luddy seems like a nice man. Maybe he can help them?

Another great chapter! I'm still excited to see what will happen next. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh my, Ariel is in trouble now... if she only have warned her father! Sebastian can be not fast enough! Oh my, please tell us she wont get hurt.

Yikes! This is getting intense! I was a bit frustrated that she didn't get her father's help right away, so I'm glad that he might get to help in some way after all. I am excited to read the next chapter. Great story so far!

Really hope that Ariel doesn't get hurt before they can reach Triton.

Wow, so there is one more chapter! Looking forward to the answer for the mystery of the journal :)

Wow, thats pretty interesting. I would like to see how will the rescue mission go on :D

I'm eager to see what's going to happen. What could possibly be in that book and why would Eric's father give it to that man? I'm sure we'll find out!