Not to bash/offend but when I see your profile picture I either see a chicken or what it’s suppose to be :

Any similar fits to this?

Hey this is the best story for young Nymphadora and Harry I have ever seen please continue I would hate it if this was to be discontinued

Please update whenever you can

Why does everyone go the manipulative dumbles route? Not that it's, bad or anything, but it's strikingly curious how common it is.

Can I adopt this story? It is very good. This story can go much farther. So can I adopt this story?

Loved your story!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

When are you going to do the rewrite?

Dreadful grammar, awful spelling, appalling sentence construction. Chapter four was the deciding moment for me to close the page. If you don’t have access to Word, download Open Office, it has the same grammar/spell-check functions and is free. Otherwise please read what you have written, remembering to capitalise proper nouns : i.e harry in lower case is the old term to harass an enemy, whereas the capitalised version is usually the nickname for Henry. A little time spent checking your work will save a great deal of grief. Please take a little more time to proof your work. It matters not if you employ every alleged cliche as long as the bones of your tale are solid, gripping the readers interest. Little irritates the bibliophile more than silly spelling errors or shocking grammar. Take your time, get it right, check that the word you’re using is the correct vernacular or that it isn’t a homophone ie soul/soul - Manor/manner. Word or the OO equivalent will query the use, suggesting the correct alternative on many occasions. As with all things better writing will come with practice allied to a little research, aggregated to careful reading of your work. Don’t be disheartened by this critique it is not intended to be cruel, just offering advice if you wish to write as a hobby or professionally. When I started forty years ago writing technical/scientific manuals I had to learn the same lessons. Lastly if you are going to take on another writer’s work adjust your style to fit theirs if you can, either that or rewrite the whole thing in your particular way. Good luck

I hope you start the re write soon, i loved the story so far.

Super confused.. You should have just started a story of your own based on the premise that Harry is a metamorph. The knee-jerk shift in writing styles and plot really do ruin this story.

... The grammar got worse. I don't know how it managed to do that, but the grammar got worse instead of better this chapter.

Seriously, can they even math? Fourth year. First year. 14. 11. Three years younger, not four!

I kind of wonder how these three would even know Katie yet. She's only one year ahead of Harry, and you can't join the quidditch team in first year (which is the only one she's finished at this point) so they wouldn't know her from that... even weirder is that the only friends who seek out Tonks, a year 4 Hufflepuff on the train are a couple of year 3 Gryffindors and a year 2 Gryffindor. Doesn't she know anyone from her own year? Or house? Or anything?

Meanwhile... you'd really think that even at age 11, with his hard life Harry would be smart enough to hide the metamorph thing. Or hell, paranoid enough given again, his life up till this point.

It somehow got even worse. ;-; It's fine, only have to put up with one more chapter of this awful excuse for writing before it changes authors...

Really need a line or something to separate the author's note at the beginning from the actual start of the story.

Made Tonks two years younger? Eh, understandable. Oh, she only LOOKS fifteen, but is actually in fact fourteen since fourth year? Okay fine, three years younger then, whatever. Totally unnecessary but still understandable I guess.

Okay wow that stammer makes it hard to read or understand Harry. So annoying, and done *completely unrealistically.* A stammer doesn't happen in the middle of words, just at the beginning.

I realize that the first three chapters are from another author, and just have to hope that you who adopted this will do better. Because it really, really needs someone to do a lot better.