| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Rebellion of the Dark |
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   HeartsGlow chapter 5 . 5/1/2018 March 30, 1996, Harry was in FIFTH year, not fourth! Also, why wasn't the younger Hermione with Harry? The story has become choppy and much of it makes no sense. Good luck, I'm finished |
| HeartsGlow chapter 4 . 5/1/2018 Your writing started out great and went down hill |
| HeartsGlow chapter 3 . 5/1/2018 Wait. How can Harry be dead? SIrius I understand, as he came back from the veil. |
| imnotraven16 chapter 10 . 5/1/2018 awesome chapter |
| Gime'SS chapter 1 . 4/18/2018 please write warnings for time travel |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 2 . 4/15/2018 Quite a surprise for Harry to find out about the contract. Thanks for sharing! |
| mckertis chapter 2 . 4/15/2018 It seems like a good enough English, but...many, many sentences and constructions leave me very confused. It is all very strange, and often doesnt make much sense. People in England do not speak like that. This is a very alien mentality. |
| r.tidmore chapter 4 . 4/15/2018 tried to read but sorry. this is not worth it. summary does not match story as Harry is Dead. not time travel either. |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 4/15/2018 Good first chapter but seems to lack a bit of continuity. For example, Sirius walks in and talks with Harry but there are no questions about how he survived going through the veil? Hermione asking if Harry knows what a camera is? Thanks for sharing! |
