Heyo Mate!
Don’t know if you’ll see this, but I’m really liking this first chapter.
You really got the characters and their traits down. I especially like the exchange between Cade and Tessa. It really shows the strain between them that we see at the beginning of the movie.
Cheers!

I hope you continue this

This is a really good chapter. I like how you wrote Optimus’s character by making him stay in character while giving him an unusual trait (getting into the same shows Tessa watches) as well.

Only Optimus can win a fight with just words

So glad you started writing this again :) looking forward to seeing what happened next

Dang Optimus could stop an argument with one word I bet.

SUPER HAPPY TO SEE YOU BACK! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

This is a very sweet story. The idea of Optimus as a houseguest put a very interesting spin the situation. I hope there’ll be scenes with Optimus not understanding Earth customs leading to funny situations.

This is better then I expected honeslty. Is the other bots gona show up? cause that would be awesome

My name on here is Cin70,I didn't log in but, this story has a good beginning I really like it and the fact that you humanized Optimus in the setting of the movie, age of distinction is very good. A little longer of a chapter if you can or want to do would be nice.

THIS IS SO AWESOME!

I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER WITH EVERY CHAPTER!

I would have loved homework help from Prime. You have an opportunity here to inject a lot more fluff/friend-bonding moment.

Will the other Autobots in AOE join them?