this is soooooo good
please update

I wonder if Pyrrha will one day accept that Juanes one purpose in life is to be loved by her. Or will she be crushed by that realization?

Hey, this story is really good. Are you going to update it soon?

I like the idea of this fic and I do enjoy some of your fics I can only say this: WOW, she realised that creating someone with all those flaws would ruin their life; what a surprise, almost like she shouldn’t have made him have all of them.
Either good idea for a fic.

Ok, let me get this out of the way: why would she make someone so severely fall behind? Portraying him to be a clumsy idiot who will keep trying to achieve something that he can’t be because she has predetermined for him to be bad at. And baseball to boot. The same thing where Emerald is. What’s the matter with her?
Good concept though.

This is seriously good. I look forward to reading more, keep it up!

This fic is sooooooo GREAT.
I'm more of a Ruby X Weiss shiper, but Ruby X Oscar is also a great ship. I hope you will make Yang X Blake a thing (I love the Bumblebee ship ), but u don't have to (still hoping).

Just keep up the good work ;)

Very nice and lovely chapter, i loved every moment of the two dorks. I kinda preferred Qrow x Summer like in 'Forlon Hope', but doesn't matter and i'm curious to see whath outcome will have this subplot, same por Neptune x Neo(poor guy, he isn't my favourite charachters, but i would pity any sane person who dates thath yandere). Keep up the good work and see you soon. I would gladly take the job, but i'm already messed.

Good job lad! You did good.

*sigh* And the story continues in the best and worst ways... Clearly Pyrrha is gonna fall for him. And she’s trying to ENCOURAGE him to flirt with Weiss... It’s as if you WANT the Arkos fans to suffer~

Either way, I’m excited to see where this goes!

I think it would probably be a cool idea if at some point Jaune found out he was made for Pyrrha - but he refuses to accept it. Has his own existential crisis, tries to prove the book wrong, gets angry because of what it means about his family, who are the most important people in his life but the universe apparently treated as “add-ons,” tries to dust himself fr9m Pyrrha or maybe even go out with someone else, but in the end he has to accept that he is who he is. And nothing can change that. Especially not when the universe is trying to force the issue.

Hell, it would be cool to see if RUBY of all people gained a crush for him. Then Oscar gets hurt, Ruby gets hurt because he isn’t interested (and possibly going after Weiss), and no one really wins.

Anyway, really good work.

Never thought it would be this complicated after she did it. I'm guessing she won't fall for him until he himself helps her in her own darkest moment. Not sure if you intend to reflect canon with Jaune and Weiss. This is an oddity mainly because Pyrrha is distancing herself from him and it's actually unfair to treat him this way. It's worse than how canon was because all she feels is pity and guilt towards him when he's honestly done nothing to deserve it. She generalized hid personality buy that doesn't mean she knows who he actually is. Knowing a person's background and/or history doesn't make you actually know a person as whole but have an objective (hope I used the word correctly) view view at best. A bond should be made to actually make it real. Darn. I went in a rant. Sorry about this. Until next time.

I can’t wait for Jaunes extensional crisis.

I love this story and idea. Please continue I do enjoy your writing.

This story is adorable. I swear, it's almost like it was Specially Made (:D) for me!

Joking aside, this story looks like it will be perfect for me to read. Given the two chapters I've read so far, I feel confident in saying that this will sit near the top on my list of favorite fanfics.

I eagerly await your next update.