You should do a renting system. Since Kenji's wares are quite expensive from the normal peeps. Renting is one of the better ways to expose it to a lot of people, but a few rules are of course needed since some might abuse it.

I love this story. It’s getting more and more complicated which is interesting

This is super cool

I earn about 400 EUR a month and my top price point would be 100 EUR. Reason for such a price would be the fact that only bad fat is converted, thus it would improve my life drastically by making me more healthy. For me this is a a few months to my life span pill.

At this point you should have just written an original. I mean just change the names of place and people remove the first few chapters and no one would recognise it is a naruto fan fic

Damn, if he read horror stories why didn't he also think if those scenarios where the team that actually takes the exit get in more trouble? though the ones that go to the other room do too, NVM honestly it would have been bad going in either tunnel

I've thought of that theory too, all those videos from my "research" materials contradicted that though... eh I guess those were the exemption... lol

Bro, is this from The Mummy? or whatever movie it was? I swear, if those beetles turn real, that'll be some shit, I'm looking forward to itheh, so I was right

Didn't the grass in that one movie lean towards the people? I don't really remember it's been like 2 years since I've seen it

It kinda sucks that for the couple last minutes Kenji always misses out on what Kaguya is trying to say, I really think you should have them recap because what if Kaguya does something, that she wanted to tell him but he didn't hear, and then he gets caught flat footed, because of everything? Hm ..

Heh, someone brought up ectoplasm? Goddess above, I didn't think about that! hell I was searching for a Ghostbusters x Danny Phantom fic in my laptop when I read the ghost chapter, this is quite dumb if me... hahaha

I wonder how your dungeon would work ..

It's kinda dumb if Kenji to deny that cultivation, the one he uses, could be similar to Wuxia world, I mean who's to say that just because he may the stories something similar doesn't exist? I mean for Kenji A Naruto was fictional, but look where Kenji C and B are? like he should have thought that there's a possibility that most media or novels that supposed to be for entertainment are actually real, or there is something like it out there...

Can you put the exorcism talismans effect in a ring or glasses so that others can see the ghosts too? I'm not saying they could interact with them, hm maybe if you put the talismans effect in some gloves?

hahahahaha, god that bonus scene, damn, Hm, I can't help but kinda like Aiko, of course Kaguya is still the best, I'm guessing the noble that was buying land was Kenji huh? I'm a little confused on the measuring stick part, wdym by that? like is Kaguya using others and Aiko to compare their progress to Kenji and see how much worth he has? or talent? or something like that... hm...

Haha, I like how you are portraying Kaguya, though Labyrinths? Holy- I mean I hope you don't end up making them have a dungeon break out or something, though how are you going to explain the Ancient runes to the people? and she said that there's stronger beats guarding it? damn

I don't really like the automatic canons with talismans, but everyone has their own tastes

Hm. you have a bunch of unneeded "?" in the latest chapters, honestly there's quite a bit so I can't really point then out, sorry bout that,

I honestly thought Kenji was going to make the Daimyo cry tears of blood, because if the title, but I should have known it would have something to do with the Madam considering the scene where they saw him regrow his arm

a Velociraptor? ha damn, that's quite the transformation, can he at least turn back into a small lizard?

this ending is probably my favorite, kaguyas actions before she possessed Kenji a close second

Heh, so she scattered the dust? I wonder if a new clan will emerge that is similar to the Aburame and inuzuka, just with chakra, spirit? beats? it'll be, well not a twist but yeah, it's kinda expected, even if anybody can learn how to do it maybe someone would be so good that they can qualify for a clan-esqe (how do you spell it? lol) position

"Argh! My Leg!" I died

"Look-see" bro what's up with you? honestly it's not that funny but God...

Hm. I just read some of the previous reviews and saw one where someone said that you should make everyone that cultivates able to use the upgrade system or something similar, I really hope you don't do that, I kinda like the system part because Kenji is the only one that can use it, if you ignore the almost similar ability Kaguya, and her clan I guess, have, still I really hope you leave the system unique to only Kenji, this is only a suggestion, no matter how much I want it to actually not be, what I mean is this is your story but I just hope if you decide on what to do, do what you want, it's your story, I'll just hope that whatever you do in the future you only stay true for what you want for the story, not what we want, necessarily, considering you can still take suggestion lol

anyways

Damn, that was pretty epic, I didn't mind the Kaguya possession part, honestly that was pretty, cute? affectionate? of her... idk I just like it,

That part where Jiraiya confused his rolled back eyes to Byakugan was pretty funny, and then that last scene change hahaha

Haha, so It was Hiashi that used the dead body? pretty funny

Honestly once you had that scene by the river I knew there was going to be a plot with Tsubaki as a focus, didn't actually expect it to end this quickly though, I mean it's not thanks to my deduction skills, it's just that I read another story with a similar plot, not that I'm saying you copied or took inspiration it's just it's hard for anyone to be original in this day and age, not that it's impossible

anyways nice chapter!