| Reviews for Part of the Family |
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YaoiFanaticFreak chapter 1 . 5/27/2018 This sounds interesting and it makes me anticipating on what would it be in the future as Uub is staying with them. I can't wait to see how is Uub's social life experience in getting to know more of the Z-Fighters; how would their interaction be, and also his first time having to deal with 'city life' as he comes from a village far away from the busy city. |
Nadesko chapter 1 . 4/17/2018 Oh, my! I passed out this history completly! How is possible? Hahaha This sounds fun! I want to see Uubs pointview about Goku and Chichi relationship! I hope you update soon! Greetings! |
V 4 Vellian chapter 1 . 4/13/2018 I particularly don't like short chapters, but thisn't isn't all bad, not at all really. To be honest, I like how you make Uub seem a little anxious. We have very little information about the boy's characterstics as we didn't get much from him in Z and we don't have none at all in Super. As for GT, that doesn't really count. Anway, if you're planning on going through with this fanfic, I wanna see how you bring Uub up with the family. Soon enough, he should get used to everything. But for now, it'd be cool if you focused onto him getting used to social life, as far as going into the city sometime, ya know? He's from a villiage and not used to anything else so it'd be nice to see all of that. But, the most important thing of all, would be his fighting. I understand that there are going to be a few short fics, but if you plan on making it into a full fledged story, I'll continue reading. |
Courtney chapter 1 . 4/13/2018 I love this fic! I love reading fics when Goku brings Uub with him to his family! |
ThickerThanLove chapter 1 . 4/13/2018 This is a great beginning! It will be interesting to see the others react to both Goku’s return and the presence of Uub! |
Silencia101 chapter 1 . 4/12/2018 I'm am here for this story! I've read some fics about Goku just using IT to go to and fro, and some others that suggested the idea of uub staying with the Son's but just don't for this reason or that, but I didn't think that I'd want to know how it would be like if Uub actually stayed & lived with the Sons, this is an interesting take and I do look forward for more :) I'm aware of Uub, his potential as a character, but haven't really felt any other interest in knowing more about him, his personality, I just mainly have what I recall from EoZ, and I actually think that I can see that personality (nervous young lad who cares about his village) and applied it in a natural way in this story. You make me feel like getting to know Uub more, in a way xD Btw, how long has it been since Goku left with Uub? |
SierraLarson chapter 1 . 4/12/2018 I'm already loving this. I can't wait for more. Like him meeting the children. Also, god I wanna see him catch Goku and Chi Chi kissing. I feel like that'd be funny XD |
nancy103 chapter 1 . 4/12/2018 I swear...Chi-Chi could be an Italian mother quite easily. LOL |