Please update. This a good Story.

I think this story is really cool and i really want to see more

You need an editor and the discipline of an outline. If you're going to tell a story in the first person, you need to pick a tense and stick to it. Personally, I can't see any good reason for telling this story in the first person. Your main character's emotion read more like a menu or a laundry list, and in the end, or even in the beginning, it's difficult to feel anything genuine from her or about her, so while events just happen to her like a piece of furniture, its hard to be emotionally invested in the character or the story

well writen chapter. Very entertaining.

Great job, you portrayed quite well the friendship of Elena and Adamai, while the fight was a really jumpscare. Can't wait to see what will happen now, good work.

Yugo is king you know

Please update!

Esta muy bueno . Me encanta porfa haz más

I dont get what was embarrassing Yugo. Was it the thought of holding her close in his arms. Did he enjoy rescuing her more than a friend would?

Great writting! You have my attention.

If I was her I would get mad at Qilby for being in my personal space unnecessarily. How uncomfortable. lol

I love it, want to see more aldut Yugo and Elena.

Nice dialouges and introspection, i really begin to like this couple. Can't wait for next events, and hoping for a lot more fights.

Lovely chapter about the group, i also laughed at Yugo's antics. See you soon.

Awww, cutie shy Yugo I expect more teasing later on haha :D (like when Ad will notice more of Yugo's behavior *wiggles brows*)
I'm so glad you updated tbh