I love It that's so sweet

Funny Matt said there was a warm feeling which would be helpful right now summer just skipped fall and straight to winter and my sister has a condition where we can't turn on the heat cuz if she's to hit her heart rate goes so yeah Matt please bring warmth to our house

*fangirling intensifies*

I thought that was wonderfully written

That was excellent

Not bad! Not bad at all! I'm interested to see where you decide to go with this :)
Cheers!

~erebororbust~

Aww that was amazing

I really loved how you used Matt's point of view! :D
The story elements were a right mix of keeping it to the show and doing your thing. I really hope you keep writing! I would love to see more of Matt's point of view!

It’s awesome that you used the original dialogue from the show while writing this. Although maybe one or two of the battle description paragraphs is a little long, it’s nice to see what you think of Matt’s point of view. Super amazing chapter.