Please update soon I’m looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter.

I really like this story, I hope you continue it someday :)

Just thought I would check out this story again. It's a delightful read and I do hope you continue one day.

This fandom needs a few more mature minded writers, especially when they write about Wilder Wonka.

I have read this chapter several times, every few months I go back and re read this charming, and intruguing introduction to Ellie.

This is a lovely story with so much potential. Your Wilder Wonka is fantastic and I truly hope that one day you are inspired to continue this story.

I hope you update soon. I’ve reread what you’ve written for the third time today. So far every chapter has been fantastic. You’ve characterized WilderWonka very well, so I wouldn’t worry about that if I were you.

i was actually so sad when i got to the end because i had no more to read! i really love this, and sincerely hope you'll update this soon! i'm really curious on if she's going to tell them exactly what happened, and on seeing more of her interactions with everybody. and also wondering what that mysterious figure is doing, he be sketchy. oh, and the room! the room! it sounds wonderful! man, i would love to live in the factory...all that candy...anyway! i adore this already and hope you update soon, as i've already said lol

How can it have been over two months since this was posted, and how can I have neglected to review for so long?

I’m loving the insistence that Ellie has to be a spy! Ellie herself does well, interacting with people she knows are fictional characters, and yet, here they are talking to her, and pointing out that she is staring whenever she tries to get used to her altering reality.

Thanks for the update, I shall hope to be able to read some more soon.

Is Ellie going to tell them were she came from and what she does for work?

More please! You’ve got me hooked

Wow. I love this.

She behaved so naturally in a wierd situation. I wonder how she will cope outside the factory when she leaves.

Not only is she in a strange fictional world, but also a much different time period. She is going to have to deal with the great depression, sexism, poverty and so much more.

I don't know where you will take this story, but I would love to see Ellie trying and failing to survive on her own outside the factory, at least for a while.

I'm also really keen to see Mr. Wilkinson in this story.

Oh, and thank you for writing a WilderWonka story. He is my fav Wonka, even though I preferred the modern versions of the kiddies. The 1971 film was just perfect.

What a refreshing change to find a story like this that’s original and written by someone who actually knows how to spell and use grammar properly. This is a great tribute to Gene Wilder. So glad I stumbled across this, it’s a treat! I hope you continue

I love this! I can't wait for more!

This is a wonderful tribute to Gene Wilder (he's my favourite actor), and your prose is great. Keep on writing, I know this will be a lovely tale.

Wow. This story. It had me from chapter one and all the way to this chapter. This song is absolute magic.

It's just so stunningly beautiful. It had me in tears and honestly explained my feelings for Gene so well that it really hit me hard. I honestly hope that you continue this, because I feel like you're one of the very few people who understand the pure magic and brilliance behind not only this movie, but the man too.

Thank you so much for writing this. I'm sure Gene would be honored that such an amazing writer such as yourself has chosen to write about him.

You’re most welcome for the review! I always enjoy your writing. I’ve since watched the film so now my memory has been refreshed. I’d actually forgotten how much I love it! Anyway I loved this chapter. Ellie is a shortcake like me! Thank goodness Wonka allowed her to stay, though something tells me she’ll be sticking around a bit longer so their paths will indeed have to cross again. Oooh a dark mysterious stranger at the gate...now who could that be I wonder? Looking forward to more! And I got the reference, he was whistling Puttin’ on the Ritz! :D xx