| Reviews for Archangel |
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Fyr RedNight chapter 16 . 5/14 Great work on this chapter. |
tonytaker chapter 16 . 4/28 I have a bad feeling about this... |
Guest chapter 16 . 4/23 Nice chapter, but I have to be honest. Calling her delusional and lobbying for expulsion is a very radical change. This depiction of Ironwood feels kind of unfair. In canon they believed the "why" stemmed from adrenaline caused by how rough the fight had been. Ironwood was calm and apologetic over having to disqualify Team RWBY. He clarified it was being considered an isolated accident. Plus his overlap with Velvet on how even experienced fighters can get spooked and see things. The plan was to rile up civilians not fool trained Huntsmen. P.S Sorry if that was long, I respect your right as the author to tell the story as you see fit. Interpretations of this scene that drastically change Ironwood's behavior like this are just a pet peeve. P.S.S You might have misspelled Yang's last name a few times. |
NinjaFang1331 chapter 16 . 4/23 Excellent update |
hirshja chapter 16 . 4/23 How do they not know when the CCT was hacked? Didn’t the tower still get attacked during the dance? Additionally, the very fact that the CCT is compromised should mean that they no longer use it to deliver sensitive messages, for instance the message to Pyrrha that Glynda says she will be sending. |
246vili chapter 16 . 4/23 Great chapter. Liked how Jaune was the one who pointed out things people like Glynda should have seen in the first place. The only thing missing would had been an early than canon talk with Velvet about Coco "seeing things that aren't there" during her fight with Emerald and they would had been able to put the peices together that Emerald is the one who used an illusion on Yang. Keep up the good work. |
Hellhoundz6 chapter 1 . 4/23 Damn this story. Needs a bigger following great writing |
Thehappyvampire chapter 16 . 4/22 Yeesh. Jaune has a number of bridges to repair. |
246vili chapter 15 . 3/26 Interesting story so far. Looking forward for the big battles and of course to the big moment when NPR finds out that Jaune was not just alive but right in front of them. Keep up the good work. |
Fyr RedNight chapter 15 . 3/19 This is an interesting story. The plot is original and your way of writing the characters makes them relatable and entertaining to read. I look forward to read what'll happen next! |
Chris Adair chapter 15 . 2/14 Really good. Looking forward to more. |
tonytaker chapter 15 . 2/6 Let's go I'm looking forward to the next chapter |
NinjaFang1331 chapter 15 . 2/4 Excellent chapter |
Alejandro Saito Rodriguez chapter 15 . 2/4 i was waiting for this, thank you so much for another excelent chapter :D keep up the good work! |
blackwingww chapter 14 . 11/14/2019 New Chapter (assuming jaune x weiss happens and stays permanent) Archangel: The White Knight |