Reviews for Not even the sands of time shall separate us
Lexie-chan94 chapter 1 . 4/13
Please update soon!
123 chapter 1 . 4/6
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supernaturalreader21 chapter 1 . 8/9/2019
Please update soon
Faery66 chapter 1 . 3/1/2019
Hope to read more soon.

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Terra-Fair chapter 1 . 1/18/2019
I hope you do continue.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
Ah! I would love to read more!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
Update please!
Im a guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
Pretty interesting. I'll see how this one goes.
flowerybomber chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
This is very nice. First enkidu!harry fic I read and you did a good job potraying him. I've to agree with Hinasukichan though, the timeline is a bit confusing... and a bit rushed. Maybe you could elaborate a bit more on the detail? Overall this is good. Hope to hear from you again soon. Thanks for sharing! Cya~
lilith20047 chapter 1 . 5/17/2018
Please update this is interesting
rhizz17 chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
Please update...
greenespeon1995 chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
i really hope in another update!
Hinasukichan chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
This story is verry interesting, although confusing as well. Its good, that is no doubt, great even but the transitions or time line is a little confusing. For example, age specifications or what time/year Hadrian is at, its a little confusing to follow. You can make guesses but at the same time, a little confusing since some of it is written in pass tense and switch the present and future tenses. This story has potential, just needing to make the time line more apparent. Also, at what age is Hadrian when he leaves for Japan and meets the japanese crew/staff? Are they fellow students, people he will be learning with or different, since you used the word staff, like hes going to be teaching at the school or something? Did he stay the full course at Hogwarts? (7 years I beleive). What of Voldemort? I assume he isn't resurrected? Clarifications to these are also nice, unless those will be later revealed in the story, like Gilgamesh getting mad at the english wizards/witches for trying to drag Hadrian back to help them deal with Voldemort or something like that. Anyway, clarifications for these would be nice, otherwislse the story is great.
Moving on past the critique, again, you story is great. Since in the story the fuyuki fire happened 8 years ago, I assume that Hadrian is arriving before the time line of fate/stay night. Interesting to see which veraion you use. Anyway, plot differences I assume will happen. Like Gil meeting Hadrian and having the most emotional/best reunion ever and then start staying with Hadrian instead of at the church, not like Hadrian can't supply Gil with mana/magic right? Maybe make Gil more humble? I would also assume that Gil's attraction to Saber/Artoria ends unless you change that, since in the story you said that Gil didn't get together will anyone because of his love for Enkidu, although that was when he was still with Gil so who knows.(The suspense!) Maybe Hadrian will meet Shirou and divert him from the path of the hero, or at least take him under his wing and teach him stuff and alter shirou's goal so he isn't so self sacrificial. That would be amusing when emiya archer comes to see his younger (alternate) self so different, maybe. What of Rin? Since the Tohsoka family is like the leader/overseer of fuyuki, the introduction of a new magic, especially Hadrians god like magic of old, would catch her attention? What of Sakura, will Hadrian see her, the worm creasts and be like "ueah, no this vile thing should'nt exist and i am going to get rid of the worms (literally Zouken)" or something along thoses lines? Oh the possibilities are endless with this story. It will be interesting to see which route you take. Will the same servants even be summoned, will Hadrian get a servant. I would assume with what his mana/magic of old/gaia/gods, or maybe he'll connect with Gil since he's finally reunited with his old friend/crush/love after so long and doesn't want to part with him, and sees all other unworthy to be summoned by Enkidu aside from himself. That will be interesting. I love your story, not many with Enkidu x Gilgamesh, which is sad since those 2 are like, OTP in my opinion. Still, look forward to how you go on with this story! Do your best with the next chapter/update! Cheering you on! .
yukina140292 chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
update more please!
birdy1770 chapter 1 . 4/17/2018
I really like this story and hope for more chapters to read
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