I love this story so muuuuch! All the wholesome family bonding moments that I love and crave! Thank you!

I’m almost weeping irl u got me haha
/ugly sobbing

That was beautiful! I love it! I absolutely love this! I have wanted the rest of the team to know how Lance felt, but it never did happen. And then you wrote this. I love it.

This is by far the most creative fan fiction I have ever read! It’s so good! Heartwarming, everyone’s in character, it is nothing short of perfect, just like you!

-Nova Scotia

Oh god. I love this. The entire thing. Everything.

Awww, even Keith managed to get out how he really felt. My heart nearly burst from how cute this was OwO

Oh, I wish this one was longer! Nice story. (:

Love the call-back to their space spore fight in season 2, where Lance claimed to be aiming for someone other than the person he'd hit. Ha! Right...

Interesting take on possible internal Lance feelings. (Oh, I so hope we finally get more Lance feels in season 6!) Augh, them witnessing the dark feelings connected with Hunk first is so foreboding! "What sort of darkness lurked for them?", indeed. I loved the interactions with Hunk, Pidge, and Shiro especially.

Thank you for the story!

Hello !
I really like stories about souls and travels in someone's mind, so when i saw it, i told myself i had to go read your fiction ! And I enjoyed it a lot, it was pretty cute and interesting.

Sometimes it sounds a little repetitive, because you know, all the characters had pretty the same thing to do to cure Lance's soul... Like, listen what hé think of them and his fears about it, and be kind talking tout thé little-Lance (who is really cute, actually). Well, it's repetitive but finally as each character and each link is different from another, that was still interesting to follow them through Lance's soul. But actually, I couldn't help thinking there will be a last obstacle, like a kind of big black monster that wants tout eat your soul and stuff... But nah, all the paladins go reconfort baby Lancey Lance, and that's it.

But still, this is a pretty nice fiction, kinda cool.
Have a nice day ! Bye (:

PS : Um, sorry if my english is bad, or anything, i'm not a native speaker so i still make some mistakes ' ...

I don't have a name for this feeling that is now squatting in my cheast right now. It's what's left behind after a fluff overdose. Love it!

Holy wow! Like, seriously wow! This was absolutely incredible from start to finish. I loved all the little episodes for each paladin. Lance calling Hunk and Pidge 'brother' and 'sister' was heartwarming. I am actually near tears here, and that is no easy feat!

Well done on all fronts! Thank you for writing!

That moment you get curious and look up other stories by IcyPanther only to realize they are absolutely amazing as well. :3

Awwwww! The ending had me.. cooing and screaming (in a good way) and.. so full of emotion! I love the family part (and the angst.. oops?) and your writing style.. Love the story and love you.. (time to binge read)

That was a cool and fun idea! It was indeed very anime-like (Shiro, I feel ya), felt a little like Natsume Yuujinchou with all the talks about spirits and souls ;) the structure also reminded me of the first Voltron graphic novel, when they were on a quest to find this Magical Object and each of the paladin had his own task to complete throughout the journey, so everyone got their time to shine. I love stories structured like this, especially when they're centered around Lance and everybody gets to show how much they love and adore him.

All the parts were good (that note about Hunk not wanting to puke in Lance's soul has cracked me up), but my favorite one was probably Pidge, because I just love her and Lance's sibling relationship so much and I never tire of her realizing he's thinking of her as his sister (which is also why I've addressed this in at least four fics of mine :P). And awww, he gave her peanut butter cookies in the cafeteria? Seems like a familiar scene! Great minds do think alike XD (although mine was peanut butter Oreos, and I had to google it to check they really exist because we don't have them in my country, how sad). But I also enjoyed Hunk's part very much because baby Lance is tooooo cute. I totally get Keith and Pidge though - I don't do babies, like, at all :P I think they're cute for like two minutes, and then I lose interest. Not a kid person, nope, not at all.

Great idea and great execution! I enjoyed it very much!

I only just got the time to read this and holy frick those feels were real! Gotta say, I’m a sucker for Keith admitting he likes and admires Lance so much, especially the way you write it. Shiro and Lance’s scene was just all sorts of perfect. Ugh how are you such a good writer?!

I'm adopting child Lance. I don't care what anyone else says. LANCE YOU'RE MY SON!