I really love this story ! I always keep that something in this part, as nobody accused Peter or defended Aslan anymore. He is the great king, he met Aslan, crowned him, came to Narnia again for him and still speaks against him.
And Lucy the brave, defends it but when Peter says the greatest blasphemy she is silent.
I feel like they don't give Edmund enough credit, and silver crowns are just as important as gold crowns.
I like that you give it importance, as you develop the story in a single chapter, you show your strength, your spirit, but showing that all four are necessary for balance, to be good rulers

Forgive me if there are any misspellings, English is not my language.
I hope you write more stories from Narnia, I love your approach.
I want more from Lucy and Edmund.

Wow that was badass and epic. I love seeing Lucy and Edmund acting as a king and queen. I don’t get I often enough of them being serious. It always give me chills when I read something as well written as this.

I love this, my dear. You write so beautifully and I am happy I found your account

Beautifully written, tears in my eyes

I've read and reread this fic many many times. Each time l, I crave more. Your writing and characterizations are incredibly vivid and realistic. I adore how you gave Edmund and Lucy these... extra personalities. They’re still themselves, but stronger, wiser, and full of the Light of Aslan.

I'm always disappointed with PC, because it falls so flat. But this scene... I wish it were real. And I wish I could see Peter's reply!

And please continue!

There is another one that is exactly like this. But, it sounds amazing. I love how you brought out Lucy's authority and valiance. I feel like most people ignore that. Very good work!

this is a REALLY cool idea. Are you thinking about continuing it? I really enjoyed it and would like to see what happens next.

I really, really liked this!

THIS! I always loved a good Prince Caspian AU with Lucy acting on her faith and love for Aslan but not once did I ever think that I needed this plot until I read this. I really hope that you’ll continue this maybe as a Drabble fic? To show the consequences of the Silver Crowns trying Peter and all that!

Amazing story. I love stories like this that talks about the golden age but in a bittersweet way. the golden age is past and gone but it still lives on in the four of them and they are old, young, immortalized in lores. I like the way it ends. I wish there was proper closure as to how Peter pleas but at the same time, I felt the way it ended also was very good.

wonderfully story.

How did it end? Could you continue it? Pleeeeease

Interesting point of view, I liked it

All I can say is, it fits. I always pondered what sort of power the younger siblings would have over their older siblings, and this story honestly seems to line up with the characters.

Then there's the lovable angst factor...

Ahhh! But what - that was amazing - and you had me all caught up in the tension and SEEING the whole thing - and then it just ended? Wow. wow. Well, don’t know if you ever planned to continue, but I sure would read it! And if not, then it still stands great on its own. Thanks so much for writing and sharing!