Well, Hermione Potter is full of herself, isn’t she?

Nice chapter. But I have to ask how in nine hells Ollivander got an Erymanthian boar tusk? It was an uncatchable, impossible to hunt, hulking type creature. (Even for wizards, and Heracles who fought it was a demigod according to mythology.)

Keep up the good work. This story has potential.

I'd love it if you focused on ron more. he seems to be the most interesting of the lot.

Continue the storyline please

I have only one problem with this chapter, it is well written and flows well making it easy to read but you stated that Ginny was the seventh child of a seventh child, and the Weasley family only have 7 children. Yet later in the chapter you stated that Ron was the youngest, that then would make him the seventh child, not Ginny.

Hermione is so obsessed with her mission that she hasn't truly examined all of the differences around. She might not have gone back in time. Hermione may have gone to a different world.

I like the way you are making Luna a more complex background. Most fan fic writers create a chibi-Luna that acts like a childish character from Japanese anime. Luna is obviously being controlled by some supernatural entity. I look forward to seeing the big reveal later in the story.

Took you so long! Good chapter , One of the stories inspired me to write a story which I'm going to post in Octomber probably. Nice work, keep it up.

Ron abused for so long without one to defend him T.T

yasss i love that Ron make himself not joining Gryffindor, his family is mean at him, but his journey in slytherin wont easy too

poor Ron T.T

Didn’t see Hermione Potter coming.

I don’t think lily was anywhere near Severus in potions. Slughorn said, "Even you, Severus!"

Really enjoying this fic! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

I came for Ron and stayed for the story! thank you!

After one of the best chapter so far (certain technical problems aside), I'm really sad to say this chapter is by far the worst chapter in the story.

There are certainly good part in this chapter. All three boys are used well for their role: Ron is the cunning tactician who comes up with the plan to corner Mariette to fit his new role of being Slytherin. Neville shows his hidden Gryffindor courage by standing his ground and tell Luna she went to far. Although Dudley is the one that is used the best in this chapter where he snaps Mariette's wand. This action would be too excessive for any other character, but a great fit for Dudley because it reflect both his disdain towards magic (since he would either have no knowledge about what a harsh action it is to snap a wizard/witch's wand, or more likely doesn't care), and showing his former habit of being a bully.

Unfortunately, this chapter completely falters where it counts. For a supposed Luna chapter, it has precious little of Luna in it. She is physically in most of the chapter, but most of her action just comes off as too vindictive and doesn't feel anywhere aloof enough to be Luna. Considering she is more or less also a non character in the last Luna chapter, it really make me wonder if this story simply doesn't have any idea how to use Luna in an interesting way aside from her saying Nargle (or whatever other magical creature that sounds like a bunch of gibberish strung together) once in a while, so it sticks an evil spirit into her to make her the exposition dump character and have occasional anger outburst because... it's badass and cool? If that's the case it is a real shame, because out of the 4 main characters I think Luna is the one that has the most interesting personality in canon and scrubbing it out just make her into a very bland beige character. In that case, I really suggest you read 'Crazy Like a Snake' because I think that story utilized Luna in a much more interesting way. Even if Draco is the main character, Luna simply steals the show whenever she appears.

The omaka for Hermione is also not as effective as the last chapter, because once again she is a complete non-character in this story. Mystery behind a character can build intrigue, but diving head first into a mystery before establishing the character is a prime example of putting the cart before the horse. I'd suggest you have more scenes with Hermione interacting with other characters first before you start to have her be this scheming character.