Even though this story is done, I can't help but want a sequel to it. I really want to see their stories.

A very fun story!

This story was mostly pretty good, though it was pretty standard as far as GoF fanfics go. The biggest problem for me was that the pony stuff never really mattered at all. None of the magic Harry used came from MLP, he never used his alicorn form for anything, and none of the pony characters did much that mattered and took advantage of them being ponies or dragons. Basically, the story wouldn't have been any different if Harry had been sent to any magic military base you happened to create instead of Equestria.

I rather like this story so was wondering if there will ever be a follow up to it?

Very good flow and entertaining, a very nice read!

All I can say is fantastic and more please would love to see how these changes affect the storyline of MLP:FIM timeline

You know what? This is pretty good.

Dude why?!

I would love to see this story continued or a sequel to it.

Moody's first name is Alastor, not Alistair.
And there was a moment in the first task where you said Harry's spell went off after speaking the last symbol. I'm assuming you meant syllable, unless Harry was suddenly speaking in a visible written word.

Other than that, I enjoyed the story, though I do think you could have split it up into chapters, instead of making it one extremely long one-shot.

Cool tale.

A long yet amazing one shot!

Gonna make this plain and simple (fat chance), as my muse is on vacation at this point (read: "I'm tired after work and can't be bothered to be artistic in my rewiev, nothing against you"). In the span of about 6 hous, I found and finished reading this story, and was left both satisfied and disappointed. Satisfied because the story was great, with original plot, characters and places (unless you stole from other authors what wasn't already made by Rowling or Hasbro), disappointed because there wasn't more. I've yet to visit your profile, but I'm hoping to see an announcement about a sequel there :P Keep up the good work, and be sure to pay your muse with whatever it is she desires most (it sucks not being able to write the story you want because she's on strike, I should know... :P )

Great story!

This was a very nice version.
All around, it does a great job of showing the best parts of everyone in it.
It's a good testament for both the MLP and Harry Potter fandoms.
Thank you for sharing this with us.