| Reviews for Coming Back Home |
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Guest chapter 6 . 8/16 Hi, thank-you for sharing your imaginative Doccubus faenfiction. I have read the 6 postings of Coming Back Home, I do hope you will continue with this story, I don't know when it was written or when the last update was posted? I hope that life settles down for you soon. Peace Beth...ZoieFanAnna2 |
FrenChi chapter 6 . 12/13/2019 Hi Hayley, pleeeease, continue this story! thank you by advance :) |
cheekymadom chapter 6 . 3/20/2019 nice |
Casey Van Cleve chapter 6 . 3/19/2019 Haley, I really like the 's a great idea and I like where you're taking the characters. I really hope that life gives you a break soon. I really enjoy your writing and can't wait to read more. Thank you |
Casey Van Cleve chapter 4 . 3/19/2019 Hailey, I just recently discovered you're writing and I'm so glad that I did. You have some of the greatest ideas that I've read in fanfiction so far. Your stories flow so well. The best thing about your writing is that you stay true to the characters. You right Bo and Lauren really well. It's a pleasure to read fic that is written so well and can stay true to the characters, some fanfiction writers lack in those areas. I really love this story. I hope that life gives you a break soon. thanks so much for sharing your talent. |
mulderchick35 chapter 6 . 3/18/2019 Light fae jerks! Another great chapter. Hope you are well, and I look forward to the next installment! |
sylvy260206 chapter 6 . 3/15/2019 God i so hate when Lauren is abused by these assholes. I hope Bo will find a way to keep Lo safe and eventually free her from the Ash's clutches. |
Shomed chapter 6 . 3/15/2019 Wonderful update! Love this story so much! |
Beedo chapter 6 . 3/14/2019 Fantastic chapter. I love to see how Bo cared for Lauren. Thats all new for Lo. But I think it could be a problem for Lo that she is not enough for Bo. Bo must feed from others- it could be interesting how they get that „under control“. Thanks that you continue writing for us ;) |
JCM chapter 6 . 3/14/2019 Great to see you continuing with this story as it’s a nice original tale. Cannot wait to see what happens when Bo feeds from Lauren. More when you can. |
koskat chapter 6 . 3/13/2019 Enjoying this story especially how you've written Bo and Lauren. Wish this was the way the show went. Looking forward to finding out what the Ash knows about Trick being poisoned. I'm wondering how long it will take the Ash to try to use Lauren against Bo. Not something he should try with this Bo. Thanks for this story. |
NineDays'Wonder chapter 6 . 3/12/2019 Loving this story (everything that keeps Lost Girl alive). You mentioned your life was hectic. Well, your stories help me get though my hectic life :) ! Write when you can, cause be always keep reading. I especially liked this new take on how BoLo met. Take care and thank you. |
kogaduck chapter 6 . 3/12/2019 Thanks for the surprise update. I miss this story. I hope everything works out for BoLo |
sweetcandycane50 chapter 6 . 3/12/2019 very good chapter. |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/11/2019 Thank you for continuing to write for this fandom,there really are vey few Doccubus fandom writers left so we really appreciate it,I love how devoted and caring Bo is in this story,this is something we didn’t get to see on the show,and I know Bo will do whatever it takes to protect her and their blossoming relationship |