I really loved this, your writing skills are magnificient and the imagery was legendary! The fact that you even did 100 global-spread characters was grand!

10/10 Standing Ovation and Hats Off!

I actually loved this by the way.

Excellent script, where it had all kinds of combatants with unique back stories. Anne was incredible with over ten kills and definitely the deadliest person in it. Even though she was on fire I still thought she might pull it off at the end lol. I would love to read about her past 2 wins if you have books for them. The development of certain characters was cool to watch as well as I didn't know for a long time who might win. Man this is coolest showcase of just how good Battle Royale can be in any form of entertainment

Again thank you for creating this, I appreciate the time and effort to make an actual interesting story about PUBG or any Battle Royale game. The Battle Royale movies and books have great fanfic stories like SYOT aka Submit Your Own Tribute for Hunger Games. Which are some of the best ones here on

So... I had a lot of fun reading this, but I have to leave some suggestions which are really important.
First, I have to point out that
GUIDELINES:
Stories not allowed
Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
Sorry, but this is kind of breaking the rules.
I would love a normal fanfiction (real fiction/story) on this, but this is violating the Guidelines for stories. I'm not sure if FictionPress allows this, but you can have a look, I guess.

shroud would win

0/10

I am really impressed! I would not have expected anyone to try to actually write 100 characters, even if many of them did die quickly at the start. I would have expected someone to focus on the perspective of one or a few characters only, and if they did try writing too many, I would have expected it to be totally confusing and unwieldy. However, I think you actually managed to pull it off, something I would have thought impossible!

I have some minor niggling quibbles about the descriptions. First of all, I love the idea of the cast of characters at the top! It was a REALLY helpful feature, considering the size of the cast! It was a little awkward how much of the characterization seemed to play off of ethnic/national stereotypes, and how the majority ethnic group for a colonized region is sort of taken as the default (e.g. black American characters are listed as "African American", while white American characters are listed as "American". I also presume that the "Australians" are white, and the "South Africans" are black), but the stereotypes are made much less bothersome by the fact that it is spread around so much, so everyone seems to get a piece of the smear (except for the Israelis, I suppose the most heroic types in the story. Speaking of which, I was actually surprised when they died! I thought they were going to accomplish more. Not a criticism, here, just a surprise.). Furthermore, it makes sense that, given this sort of post-apocalyptic scenario, we are mostly getting the worst of all sides of humanity. The descriptions were clear overall, so overall, I really did like the cast of characters section!

One more minor quibble, there is mention of Tallulah's tearing into someone with "M249 bullets". This is technically correct, but it might feel a touch more polished to say "5.56mm bullets" or even "5.56mm bullets from Tallulah's M249". Again, nothing major. For research into any of the details of any of the guns (e.g. what type of ammo they use), I recommend the PUBG wiki on Gamepedia.

Speaking of common quibbles, though, your spelling and grammar are really above par for this website, and I greatly appreciate that!

I really enjoyed the banter among the British secret agents in Team 3. It added a bit of goofy levity for contrast among all the grit.

Who would ever have expected that Seth, of all people, would end up killing Tellulah Anne? The initially most incapable character ended up finishing of the initially most capable one. Seth was extremely dynamic in his transformation. It felt a little odd that he had gone from practically giving up, crying in a fetal position, so quickly to being such a badass.

I liked that final confrontation very much, too. I liked the conversation between Seth and Wasilla. I liked that Wasilla won, too.

I was not really sure what to expect from this story, the first I have read for PUBG, but I was very impressed. You earned that chicken dinner. ;)

wtf

I did read it all, though fortnite is better. also get a life... can you do my english essay