| Reviews for Kids in the dark |
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   Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 7 . 7/26/2019 Why does everyone dismiss Obi’s visions and then expect him to believe Ani’s? Great chapter! |
| MagmaFist chapter 6 . 1/10/2019 It's amazing! I liked how understanding young Obi-Wan is of Anakin. :) |
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 6 . 1/8/2019 Ooooo... I love Obi through this chapter! |
| ya boy lil sista chapter 6 . 1/8/2019 cooljoanna18 out ;) |
| SpencerBrown chapter 5 . 11/5/2018 I’m so intrigued! This story is surprise after surprise. It never seems to go where I would expect, and it’s great fun! Thanks so much for sharing! |
| Aki chapter 5 . 11/5/2018 I guess they switch places in their timeline? |
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 5 . 11/3/2018 Lol. I look forward to seeing who Satine points Obi-Wan to talk to. I wonder what Palpatine is up to by being friendly to Obi... |
| Star horse chapter 5 . 11/3/2018 love the story so far:) |
| SiriuslyPink chapter 3 . 7/8/2018 Too many word ending mistakes. I think a beta would be a really good idea since it doesn’t seem like English is your first language. |
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 4 . 7/8/2018 Maybe Anakin talking about the suggestions the Chancellor made and Obi looking at him like he is crazy? Or perhaps Satine and Obi staying in contact? Ani asking why Obi didn’t have a secret relationship with Satine? Ani addressing the reason why Obi has visions and faulting him for not believing Ani’s? |
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 3 . 6/15/2018 Oh Obi... you are going to cause such a stir. I love it! |
| Kondoru chapter 3 . 6/15/2018 Oh, its going well. You did a good job with poor Ventress |
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 2 . 5/12/2018 Maybe Obi could meet his friends, particularly Quinlan(spelling?). Or maybe he could actually find somewhere with a date. Great chapter! By the way, at what age in your story does Qui-Gon start having Obi-Wan surpress his connection to the Unifying Force? |
| goanago chapter 2 . 5/12/2018 I love what you've written so far! De-aged Obi-Wan is one of my favorite tropes! A scene I would think hilarious is Obi-Wan getting intercepted by pirates... Hondo's pirates! |
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 1 . 4/20/2018 Please write more! Will Anakin save Obi? What’ll happen next? |
