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That is some cold as shit right there man. This story has great quality compared to other author's early works.

The only reason why a harem would be complicated in real life would be because the members are normies. I don't see any reason why any of the characters here would care about what society thinks about them. They probably even have the legal means/authority to maintain a happy life without any issues.

Fucking hell yeah, Hachiman is a badass motherfucker. Let's see how far the story got...

i love to sex you, lol but seriously its fuk ing good mate. as for your writing, i say its decently well enough to go by well for us to read what you mean to put out, keep the chapters going manワ.｡. o()o .｡.:*

In my opinion nothing is wrong with your story the pace is good the writing is good now advice take it slowly when writing the lemons try to explain in more detail of what they are feeling both physically and emotionally yea both point of views even if it takes up a hole chapter the lemon scene with his sister was to short and impersonal it didn't draw me in as a reader the emotion of guilt anger and acceptance didn't do it for me their getting together gelt more like a cliff note when in my opinion it was a major point in the story that should have more coverage than it did...

This chapter the only thing that bothered me was when his sister literally told him that the other girl love him and to go save her then he goes and talks to the other girl and could not figure out who she loves ... In my opinion when his sister told him that the other girl loves him and to go to her and save her she already gave him permission to do what's needed to be done ..

Anyways it's a good read keep up the good work and don't be afraid of the haters just know alot of readers don't post reviews but like your story but a hater will post without even reading just to bring you down ...
...Peace...

Can yukino be next in the harem pleaseee and other than great chapter

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lol how fluff xD please update soon

What...the hell? He...d-did he just-!? You know what? Fuck it. I was aroused anyways, so it's fine. I'm not a big fan on incest but this is an exception. Continue what you're doing and damn, nice lemon by the way.

I laughed at that, like seriously.. that was funny!

I like Hachi x Saki too! They're both the silent type

*nosebleed*

They're both cons.. lmao

Anyways, I love this one. Its so cool!