Reviews for Third Base
Guest chapter 3 . 4/22/2018
This is a great story with funny and meaningful dialogue, thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2018
Great stuff!
Leonie chapter 1 . 4/11/2018
How embarrassing being forced to kiss and tommy declaring his love no wonder she fled. I grin as i write this because they might become famous because of it. You know their 5 minutes of fame.
Sparklebright chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
Thanks Cats for this wonderful birthday gift! Baseball. Lovely conversations. And they will get married and start a family. *grins*
theamck chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
What a good story! I love them!
Germanlibi chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
Oh, what a wonderful ending and a great story.
That's what I call a " Grand Slam", Tommy!
Thanks:-D
Tess 4 5 chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
Hmmm, what a nice read for the night! I love her last words ;-) And the conversation on the boardwalk was really wonderful. Thanks for sharing this story.
MorganaNK chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
That last chapter was pure perfection... and left me with a smile
Sparklebright chapter 2 . 4/9/2018
*thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up*
SNORFL. I love this chapter, Cats! The Os beat the NYY. The American couple are sweet and amusing. Yes, poor Tommy and Barbara- their first kisses on a Kiss Cam! (That's an ingenious way to get them to finally kiss). Your descriptions as always are wonderful! Oh, Barbara don't run away just because Tommy said those 3 little words.
Tess 4 5 chapter 2 . 4/9/2018
Awww... *eyes with hearts*
When that kiss cam first was mentioned I thought 'Oh, please no, the poor people!' Then it was one of the lovliest kisses ever. That was a great afternoon with all the fun, that certain tension, the awkwardness and the embarrassment and all the obvious love between them. And that American couple made me laugh again *thumbs up* Now Barbara just has to believe and not storm off. Whatever it is that might be a problem it surely can be worked out.
Oh, that kiss was so wonderful...
Leonie chapter 2 . 4/8/2018
Tommy is being so selfish here. Wanting havers but not wanting to do something she wants. And im a yankees fan to but thats ok if nobody else does we all believe we've got the best team.
MelC chapter 1 . 4/8/2018
I’m liking this so far and can’t wait to read more. I went to see one of the NFL UK games in Twickengsm last fall. It was nice, if they had baseball gamesbin The UK, I would love to see them.
DoraKMS chapter 1 . 4/8/2018
They were forced to take a promotion? At least they are still together in London. This evening is going to be very interesting with Tommy out of his "snobby" comfort zone ;) he should have a beer to gain some courage.
Tess 4 5 chapter 1 . 4/8/2018
Yes, and I look forward to it ;-) Let's go O's!
That's a very nice start and I had to laugh about a lot of details! Wonderful!
Sparklebright chapter 1 . 4/7/2018
Thank you so much, Cats! I love it! It's the best birthday present! :) SNORFLUTS!
No coincidence that their last name is Bright, eh? Let's go O's! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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