| Reviews for Third Base |
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Guest chapter 3 . 4/22/2018 This is a great story with funny and meaningful dialogue, thank you |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2018 Great stuff! |
Leonie chapter 1 . 4/11/2018 How embarrassing being forced to kiss and tommy declaring his love no wonder she fled. I grin as i write this because they might become famous because of it. You know their 5 minutes of fame. |
Sparklebright chapter 3 . 4/10/2018 Thanks Cats for this wonderful birthday gift! Baseball. Lovely conversations. And they will get married and start a family. *grins* |
theamck chapter 3 . 4/10/2018 What a good story! I love them! |
Germanlibi chapter 3 . 4/10/2018 Oh, what a wonderful ending and a great story. That's what I call a " Grand Slam", Tommy! Thanks:-D |
Tess 4 5 chapter 3 . 4/10/2018 Hmmm, what a nice read for the night! I love her last words ;-) And the conversation on the boardwalk was really wonderful. Thanks for sharing this story. |
MorganaNK chapter 3 . 4/10/2018 That last chapter was pure perfection... and left me with a smile |
Sparklebright chapter 2 . 4/9/2018 *thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up* *thumbs up* SNORFL. I love this chapter, Cats! The Os beat the NYY. The American couple are sweet and amusing. Yes, poor Tommy and Barbara- their first kisses on a Kiss Cam! (That's an ingenious way to get them to finally kiss). Your descriptions as always are wonderful! Oh, Barbara don't run away just because Tommy said those 3 little words. |
Tess 4 5 chapter 2 . 4/9/2018 Awww... *eyes with hearts* When that kiss cam first was mentioned I thought 'Oh, please no, the poor people!' Then it was one of the lovliest kisses ever. That was a great afternoon with all the fun, that certain tension, the awkwardness and the embarrassment and all the obvious love between them. And that American couple made me laugh again *thumbs up* Now Barbara just has to believe and not storm off. Whatever it is that might be a problem it surely can be worked out. Oh, that kiss was so wonderful... |
Leonie chapter 2 . 4/8/2018 Tommy is being so selfish here. Wanting havers but not wanting to do something she wants. And im a yankees fan to but thats ok if nobody else does we all believe we've got the best team. |
MelC chapter 1 . 4/8/2018 I’m liking this so far and can’t wait to read more. I went to see one of the NFL UK games in Twickengsm last fall. It was nice, if they had baseball gamesbin The UK, I would love to see them. |
DoraKMS chapter 1 . 4/8/2018 They were forced to take a promotion? At least they are still together in London. This evening is going to be very interesting with Tommy out of his "snobby" comfort zone ;) he should have a beer to gain some courage. |
Tess 4 5 chapter 1 . 4/8/2018 Yes, and I look forward to it ;-) Let's go O's! That's a very nice start and I had to laugh about a lot of details! Wonderful! |
Sparklebright chapter 1 . 4/7/2018 Thank you so much, Cats! I love it! It's the best birthday present! :) SNORFLUTS! No coincidence that their last name is Bright, eh? Let's go O's! Can't wait for the next chapter! |