Hi! I am wondering why your story don't have any comments? Let me be you first one! It's very awesome! OwO You are showing the sensation of how Sebastian is hanging his rage and failure of not succeeding in finding Mobius in the three years after the Beacon Hospital incident to find more answers. Very delicious like Ruvik would said ;D, Sebastian is haunted with his own demons like a father and once a great detective in the KCPD. I felt very sad when I saw him in the bar the first time I played the game. But when the story continues and finally finds Lily, I was crying of happiness, after all the hell he went through, his redemption was finally solved... And with your story taking post Evil Within 1 and beginning with the second game, all I can say is wonderful. I did love how you described the way he looks in his reflection, the hate sensation of himself of being incapable of finding the truth and the only the way to take the pain away with drinking, very like him, especially when he fights the guys from the bar (I always wonder how he got his hand bandaged in the game, with your story I can have an idea of what might cause it... Or here between us, I hear a curious theory about why he has his hand with that bandage: some said, like you described in your narration, it was from a fight, some said about a bottle cut, and the one it caught my eye: probably it got the famous scar like Kidman in the Consecuence DLC... Well, this one is very rare it could happen, but it would be nice if that happened X3 ).
Once again congratulations, my friend. I hope to see more of this story or from another one. I really enjoyed every word and I think it deserves more faves and reviews for your work. Keep going! X3
Sorry if there is some mistakes, English is not my native language. ;